Recent Comments

12/17/21, 4:49 AM
Really good story. I enjoy it each time I read it.
12/16/21, 4:09 PM
Wow. No idea how I missed this when it got posted. This is awesome. Incredibly clever, fun and cute. And very hot. I loved all of the kinks you hit on. And the dialog is really great.

12/17/21, 4:37 AM
Thanks for the kind words! I also posted another chapter of Household Spirits while taking a break from Edits (if you're following that one). https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10002991 @MonsterMash62
Team Gabe, or now Hector?
12/13/21, 1:49 AM
Oh, yes! Overwhelmed by superhuman sexual technique has been one of my things since Frank Herbert did it in "Heretics of Dune." Dr. Darkness trapped in a feedback loop transforming himself and Hector under the influence of those techniques used on unlock the erotic sensations from every body part would be awesome. Blue, I am so excited that you hit on this story idea. Your writing is so good, I now have multiple series to obsess about! Thanks!

12/17/21, 4:35 AM
Oooh, a classy smut reference! I'm glad you liked it! The idea has been bubbling in the back of my mind for a while now. Edits is due an update before this story, but I do have ideas for continuing this! @Team Gabe, or now Hector?
12/12/21, 7:05 AM
Great story. Or, hopefully, the start of one! I love how refreshing you make it: flipping the whole villain overpowers hero cliché, and making it both funny and damn hot at the same time. Thanks!

12/17/21, 4:33 AM
Thanks! I have vague ideas on continuing this one. @Yunnick
Anonymous
12/12/21, 6:10 AM
What a fun story. I keep hearing Zim's voice for Dr. Darkness. Anyway, great job

12/17/21, 4:32 AM
LOL. I guess they do have similarities. Thanks for the compliment! @
12/17/21, 4:17 AM
Dude. PLEASE keep this going! the story is great but severely loses momentum with the incredibly long pauses between postings.
12/17/21, 4:04 AM
I really enjoyed the series to date. I look forward to reading more from it. I wonder if, gradually, Drake becomes more and more excited to comply with Bernard and his commands. If he doesn't, it's still super cool with me.
Kyle Cicero
12/16/21, 4:26 PM
I don't have any issues money or otherwise? With a back handed compliment too..thanks :)

12/17/21, 2:38 AM
@Kyle Cicero It looks like he was responding to the first line at the top "sites like this need support" and he may have thought you were Martin.

Kyle Cicero
12/17/21, 3:13 AM
good point. lets hope it was :)@amul
Conversion Enthusiast
12/17/21, 2:50 AM
What a beautiful showdown! Poor abdamelek, fought so valiantly and his men
Jack
12/17/21, 2:41 AM
This is a great series that has gotten me off multiple times. Keep sending chapters our way!