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Anonymous
12/16/21, 2:19 AM
please continue this story! i love the characters and the dynamic. its so good!
12/16/21, 1:13 AM
Does anyone else think that he actually has a big penis but he's made to think it's small?

12/16/21, 1:40 AM
@tanners92 I do, I think before hypnosis he was a fairly typical top with a large (or perhaps medium) cock. I think he was curious about hypnosis and the hypnotist uncovered his secret fantasy of being a tiny-dicked bottom with a hair trigger and he's now living out that fantasy. I could be completely wrong, looking forward to finding out!
12/16/21, 12:09 AM
hot. you should do more of this.
12/15/21, 7:56 PM
The part where the narrator cant properly look at his penis and instantly forgets how large it actually is was my favorite part. I love that the hypnosis really is all just in his mind. A lot of times when we see this in stories its just invisible chains (which is fine, but lacks originality at this point) but you took the same concept and gave it an interesting twist by making it cock shrinking instead of bondage or paralysis. I have a feeling that the hypnotist was telling the truth and the narrator really did ask for all this. I think when he does finally read the note thats going to come out. I wonder whether he's going to be happy with how the experience went.

12/15/21, 11:49 PM
@amul thanks, man, I really appreciate it!
Martin
12/15/21, 7:30 PM
Woah! Pure, hypnotic, slutty pleasure!

12/15/21, 11:48 PM
@Martin Thanks!
12/15/21, 11:40 PM
This is one fucking hot intense story. Love the changes and how the kid slides right into them. He needs to be a fully grown man with muscles, tattoos, nips pierced, mustache and badass attitude by the end of summer. Smoking cigars? I dunno. Maybe to freak out the bullies and the teachers at the chickenshit high school. Does he need to return to high school as a mustached badass biker/pro bodybuilder. Maybe so, the effect on the assholes and peasantry would be truly epic. If the kid does return, maybe he could convert the bullies into his own outlaw biker gang. (Author's choice. I love this story, just keep it going. righteously!) This story is well on its way to be a classic. Just don't cut the story off before it ends. And then keep it going in a well-written sequel. This kid is one of those fictional characters who is developing and growing naturally, and already there is evidence that the kid character has a life of his own. Note to author: just listen to what the kid tells you about how he wants to develop into a world-class stud, and you will never want for a plot. You will soon have at least a novel on your hands, and a damned fine one at that.
ADrew
12/15/21, 11:04 PM
@Plymouth58 GREAT NEW CHAPTER! I'm looking forward to the next one. I'm hoping him and his buddies start helping more criminals! either as kind of double agents or just openly. either would be great! also looking for drug use to get worse, much worse. keep up the great work!!!
12/15/21, 10:48 PM
Ready for acquisition.
7B7
12/15/21, 9:45 PM
chapter 5 in the works???
Dec 1, 2021
Willie Cici
12/4/21, 3:23 AM
I always read your stuff. Love it!!

12/15/21, 9:32 PM
Thanks @Willie! I had a lot of fun writing this one – I'm glad you enjoyed it :)