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12/15/21, 11:40 PM
This is one fucking hot intense story. Love the changes and how the kid slides right into them. He needs to be a fully grown man with muscles, tattoos, nips pierced, mustache and badass attitude by the end of summer. Smoking cigars? I dunno. Maybe to freak out the bullies and the teachers at the chickenshit high school. Does he need to return to high school as a mustached badass biker/pro bodybuilder. Maybe so, the effect on the assholes and peasantry would be truly epic. If the kid does return, maybe he could convert the bullies into his own outlaw biker gang. (Author's choice. I love this story, just keep it going. righteously!) This story is well on its way to be a classic. Just don't cut the story off before it ends. And then keep it going in a well-written sequel. This kid is one of those fictional characters who is developing and growing naturally, and already there is evidence that the kid character has a life of his own. Note to author: just listen to what the kid tells you about how he wants to develop into a world-class stud, and you will never want for a plot. You will soon have at least a novel on your hands, and a damned fine one at that.
ADrew
12/15/21, 11:04 PM
@Plymouth58 GREAT NEW CHAPTER! I'm looking forward to the next one. I'm hoping him and his buddies start helping more criminals! either as kind of double agents or just openly. either would be great! also looking for drug use to get worse, much worse. keep up the great work!!!
12/15/21, 10:48 PM
Ready for acquisition.
7B7
12/15/21, 9:45 PM
chapter 5 in the works???
Dec 1, 2021
Willie Cici
12/4/21, 3:23 AM
I always read your stuff. Love it!!

12/15/21, 9:32 PM
Thanks @Willie! I had a lot of fun writing this one – I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
12/15/21, 8:49 PM
wish this was real
12/15/21, 8:37 PM
hope we ll see the stud pierced, tattooed, fucked an fisted
12/15/21, 1:00 AM
You really hit on something here, Turkish culture is at once much more homophobic than American culture but it's immensely less repressed about casual contact between men. The massage scenes are really doing it for me - hot!

12/15/21, 8:08 PM
Thanks @amul! I'm trying to hint at things, without spelling them out. Since, I really don't know much about the culture.
12/15/21, 1:01 AM
I love a slow burn ...

12/15/21, 2:22 AM
Me, too. I guess I'm a little disappointed there isn't any actual hypnosis, since it's tagged - but maybe it doesn't have to be verbal to count. This is hot, regardless! A slow, gradual seduction without any mind tricks might even be hotter in some ways. I think you mean Bluto, not Brutus. It's been a while for me, too. I like the image. 🙂 Edit: just read the comments on the first chapter, lol. I guess I'm that guy... but I'm not really complaining!

12/15/21, 2:29 AM
@meatheadosis Keep in mind, it *is* a slow burn. There may very well be hypnosis coming in a later chapter.

12/15/21, 3:55 AM
@amul At this point, I'm fine with it either way. I love seduction stories! I don't know if I've ever even seen one in real life that went from a "no" to an enthusiastic "yes" (seen guys get less picky as it gets later/drunker, but that's *not* what I mean by a seduction).

12/15/21, 8:07 PM
@meatheadosis there was a Bluto, and a Brutus in the Popeye cartoons. Glad you're enjoying the story. Next time I'll have giant space lasers hypnotize him in the first chapter :)
12/15/21, 7:56 PM
It's definitely becoming steamy. This is so casual and yet so hot.