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Anonymous
3/8/25, 5:24 AM
Ohh, please tell me there will be a part 3! I'm imagining a couple of possibilities and all of them sound hot.
3/7/25, 10:55 PM
Gladly willing to help theorize! But note this is speculative, I'm not the author and I have a sappiness and romantic bias to everything I read; The central thesis and central point of what Jamie has been through, of what the symbiote has gleaned, of what Master has seen, and even what Luxor and everyone else in the League has realized, is that Jamie is fundamentally a lonely person. He doesn't have friends. He doesn't have anyone left. No family, nothing. I think that is what "Master's" plan is referring to, and I have a suspicion that Dusk will be right with Jamie during his final conversion. Maybe it's a sex scene similar to the fan story with Horizon made by cops. Maybe it's like the dream sequence where the new superdrone holds hands with his fellow superdrone as it joins its "found family". Maybe we can see Jack and Dylan again, both of them encouraging Jamie to give in Onyx was right about the mind bending, but I have reason to believe that it works so damn well on Jamie is because he is fundamentally needy, he craves connection and he wants so badly to be loved and cared for. I'm guessing that's a tiny part of the hook that he used during gym time, and I think Master might manipulate/utilize this vulnerability to the maximum especially now that it's confirmed confirmed there's a crush What exactly will Master toy with his Dusk to find the breakpoint for Jamie to fully submit during the final stage (is that next chapter or the chapter after? I feel like the climax is about to occur, both the story and for Jamie!), but I think that it's a part of what will occur!

3/8/25, 4:44 AM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) I think I agree with pretty much all of that. Good job, tofu.
3/8/25, 4:10 AM
I'm assuming Ethan is a a salaried employee or Dr. Wale is unaware of the concept of overtime.
3/6/25, 2:32 AM
This is so sweet! I love it!

3/7/25, 9:58 PM
@[Niemand63](/user/show/909148) Thank you very much, glad you liked it ! ^^
4/17/22, 6:54 AM
Please do another chapter. Maybe have someone else from the tour group go off to find Chris and meets both him and Kaa?

Spiral Desires
4/21/22, 8:36 PM
@Auraseer11 So the loosest idea I have is something along the lines of Chris waking up in the treetop, mind blurry, confused and wearing a red loincloth. He slowly recalls the previous night and feels a sense of despair at how quickly he succumbs to Kaa and how hopeless he feels, almost like he's never going to escape his power. Then Kaa appears and he and him discuss this very thing. Just when Chris feels he is doomed, Kaa offers him a choice, one last challenge and he will use his powers to free him, forgetting Kaa completely and letting him move on with his life. That challenge is simple, Kaa has to make Chris cum and Chris has to not look in his eyes. Kaa ends up coiling his prey up and edging his cock to oblivion until it becomes so intense, Chris is so desperate to cum that he finally looks in Kaa's eyes. And that's it, he's just sealed his doom. Then maybe there's a short prologue about another tour group a few years later and someone spots a mancub in the forest in a red loincloth, his eyes look completely unique though, with yellow pupils. Who knows what he's up to? But I'm sure his master always wants more fresh toys to play with!

8/22/22, 11:28 PM
@Spiral Desires That sounds amazing!

3/7/25, 6:39 PM
@Spiral Desires Please write this! I’ve been waiting for a sequel!
3/7/25, 6:00 PM
This was incredibly hot. Love the sex talk Zach was doing. I could learn a lot from him. And the sex and kink positivity is very empowering. It's great to feature a shy and vanilla kinkster ready to blossom. Keep it up! I sense romance in the air...or is it the cologne?
3/7/25, 8:35 AM
The part where he gets a fetish repeats itself, " "Whoa boy,” I said, grabbing his shoulder before he got away. " the entire small scene repeats, if that's intentional, or a mistake just let me know and I can go ahead and approve the story

3/7/25, 4:10 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Total mistake, I’ve made the edit and removed it, thanks for the catch!
3/7/25, 3:56 PM
I’m hoping that there’s more to this.
3/7/25, 3:41 PM
I guess you can't rush greatness, though I would if I could. There's a lot to noodle through here, not to mention a lot of fun. First, as before, I love being in Dusk's head, and the insight we get into his transition from a hero to supervillain’s superdrone slave. We know the basic change is voluntary, but in light of Onyx's musing on Brainwashing and Master's ability to do it, I'd wager that a lot of his submission and negation of self and slave mentality is more brainwashing than Archie’s natural tendencies. That said, it does seem that Archie was an enthusiastic participant in his own brainwashing. Then there's Jamie. Somehow, it doesn’t seem like seeing Dusk's origin story is a particularly good way to soothe his fear of Master turning him into a mindless puppet slave, since he got to see Archie becoming exactly that. But if he bothers to think about of it, he'll realize that even with all he saw, Archie is still there under all the Dusk, and still very much himself. Still, Jamie’s analogy of the "choice" he's been given to two doors with one of them set on fire is so spot on. Why was Master so pleased with what Dusk accomplished in the dream meeting, and what exactly was Dusk right about? Was Master's satisfaction just from Dusk/Archie putting the first cracks in Jamie's "NO"? Moving on, do you think Dusk is going to be pissed at Onyx's sexual use of Jamie? Or will he recognize it as furthering the cause of bringing Jamie under Master's control? Milo/DH-003's interaction with Kane is priceless. I love the way DH-003's mask falls away as soon as Kane is lost in the Network. Kane even deserves a lot of his contempt. And the memory transmitting buttplug is a truly creative and fun device. That's it for starters, though I'll likely have more to say, and would love to see thoughts and theories from everyone.
Anonymous
3/7/25, 1:53 PM
I love it, thank you!