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Mar 27, 2019
12/14/21, 4:12 AM
This story was amazing. The seduction and pleasure were very well described. I'm a little doubtful about the full transformation though.
Mar 3, 2019
12/14/21, 4:00 AM
Too bad it was so short since it was so good. It could have been interesting to know what happened before, what will happen and the process though.
Sep 1, 2018
12/14/21, 3:50 AM
It was interesting this idea of hypnotizing someone else inadvertently and helping him become a better person. I also find it very exciting the parallel between cigar and dick.
Jul 20, 2018
12/14/21, 3:40 AM
The flow was really fast but it was well done.
Apr 11, 2017
12/14/21, 2:43 AM
Four years later and this is still one of my favorites.
Dec 12, 2021
Evan
12/14/21, 1:50 AM
The simplification was great. And a cool concept. Seeing Paul as a person with a life he is being removed from to be simple is great and necessary, but I felt that the "hi how are you" chatter wasn't needed. The first half of the story could be halved again, if not more, and still accomplish what the reader needs for a connection. That said, once we get to the mystery guest, it's all tight and fun.
Dec 13, 2021
Anonymous
12/14/21, 1:39 AM
cool!! I hope there would be a sequel such that JD Hustler worked with his boss to capture and transform Jimmy’s friend, who try to find and save Jimmy.
Dec 12, 2021
12/14/21, 1:27 AM
Love the story, from beginning to end. Great character and development. And hella-hot. But I don't wanna say goodbye to Archie and Gray. I know it's not too likely, but any chance at a follow-up? Their adventures in Eden, together or separate? It's rare to find a story, here or otherwise, that has so much good energy and also passion and good sex. So I don't want to see it end.
Dec 12, 2021
12/12/21, 6:54 PM
This was excellent! It's a slow burn and you're keeping the mystery going both in terms of pacing and with the unreliable narrator. The kinks you've chosen to explore so far have worked quite well, I think. I know not everyone is into cock shrink/small cock but it's nice to see someone do something along these lines. Personally, I appreciate that you've kept the descriptions of the main character light, as soon as you commit to making him a particular 'thing' (twink, bear, hairy, smooth, black, white etc.) you limit the imagination of the audience, and sometimes that's fine but sometimes authors go way into overkill when it comes to describing characters and I think you've struck a great balance which is not something I'd expect from a new author. I look forward to seeing where this one goes. It certainly has potential to go somewhere quite dark, or not - I think it's up to whoever is the one hypnotizing our nameless protagonist.
Dec 12, 2021
12/13/21, 8:54 PM
Found this to not only be an interesting spin-off of the original series, but like how it starts to explain a bit of the background of both the business as well as Dylan's father and perhaps some of his thinking and decisions concerning his son - perhaps beyond any mind-control influence he is under. As for the pictures I'm of mixed feelings. I think the biggest issue isn't so much including them, but in finding pictures that suit the story. I usually go the other way around...build a story around a picture. About the only way to match picture to an already conceived story is to make or have it made to match. Much as I had hoped to use Poser 13 for that purpose...it was a lot more difficult than I expected it to be and gave up that plan. All-in-all though...enjoyed the story.
12/13/21, 9:18 PM
@Aaelefein I had intended to do the same thing with the current story I'm working on, and actually found that as the story took shape the photo was no longer really suitable to be included in the story at all. Which is fine, it served its purpose as inspiration.