Recent Comments

12/12/21, 6:54 PM
This was excellent! It's a slow burn and you're keeping the mystery going both in terms of pacing and with the unreliable narrator. The kinks you've chosen to explore so far have worked quite well, I think. I know not everyone is into cock shrink/small cock but it's nice to see someone do something along these lines. Personally, I appreciate that you've kept the descriptions of the main character light, as soon as you commit to making him a particular 'thing' (twink, bear, hairy, smooth, black, white etc.) you limit the imagination of the audience, and sometimes that's fine but sometimes authors go way into overkill when it comes to describing characters and I think you've struck a great balance which is not something I'd expect from a new author. I look forward to seeing where this one goes. It certainly has potential to go somewhere quite dark, or not - I think it's up to whoever is the one hypnotizing our nameless protagonist.
12/13/21, 8:54 PM
Found this to not only be an interesting spin-off of the original series, but like how it starts to explain a bit of the background of both the business as well as Dylan's father and perhaps some of his thinking and decisions concerning his son - perhaps beyond any mind-control influence he is under. As for the pictures I'm of mixed feelings. I think the biggest issue isn't so much including them, but in finding pictures that suit the story. I usually go the other way around...build a story around a picture. About the only way to match picture to an already conceived story is to make or have it made to match. Much as I had hoped to use Poser 13 for that purpose...it was a lot more difficult than I expected it to be and gave up that plan. All-in-all though...enjoyed the story.

12/13/21, 9:18 PM
@Aaelefein I had intended to do the same thing with the current story I'm working on, and actually found that as the story took shape the photo was no longer really suitable to be included in the story at all. Which is fine, it served its purpose as inspiration.
12/13/21, 9:41 AM
Short and sweet! A fun premise, is this the start of a longer story? What were your tags? Pup Play and Role Reversal?

Drake
12/13/21, 6:15 PM
@Norismo puppy play and sex slave

12/13/21, 8:29 PM
@Norismo also I am not planning on a longer story at this time.
12/13/21, 1:49 PM
Good Secret Santa entry! I think even without really have major experience with puppy play you managed to craft a story that will be pleasing to the pups here.

Drake
12/13/21, 6:17 PM
@amul thank you. If i had more word count i could have made it longer.
Nov 26, 2021
12/13/21, 5:17 PM
I'm glad you included the happy ending tag - otherwise I'd have tapped out on this one and missed the great resolution. The middle of the story was rough to get through because the stakes were so high with a child being in the picture.
12/13/21, 3:51 PM
Im loving this story. So hot and love the leather. Wonder where it will go
12/13/21, 3:42 PM
As a sub with a cock he sometimes wished was smaller, very hot and relatable.
Anonymous
12/13/21, 3:36 PM
Hot!!!
12/12/21, 6:42 PM
An amazing and complex weaving of desire and need. I still don't think anyone is better than anyone but there is a rare fairness to the ending of the story that I like. It is still mind control through sex even though it has, apparently, a benevolent purpose. The bottom line is that everyone ended up redeemed and happy. Few MC stories ended on a truly happy note as this one has.

12/13/21, 12:28 PM
@Cutlerfan i wanted something different :)

12/13/21, 2:22 PM
@Jack Parker You succeeded!
12/13/21, 1:58 PM
So dark, but I loved it! Who would expect robots that secrete mind-controlling pheromones from their armpits?