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12/13/21, 3:42 PM
As a sub with a cock he sometimes wished was smaller, very hot and relatable.
Anonymous
12/13/21, 3:36 PM
Hot!!!
12/12/21, 6:42 PM
An amazing and complex weaving of desire and need. I still don't think anyone is better than anyone but there is a rare fairness to the ending of the story that I like. It is still mind control through sex even though it has, apparently, a benevolent purpose. The bottom line is that everyone ended up redeemed and happy. Few MC stories ended on a truly happy note as this one has.

12/13/21, 12:28 PM
@Cutlerfan i wanted something different :)

12/13/21, 2:22 PM
@Jack Parker You succeeded!
12/13/21, 1:58 PM
So dark, but I loved it! Who would expect robots that secrete mind-controlling pheromones from their armpits?
12/13/21, 1:57 PM
Guilty erection alert!
spiralthiago
12/13/21, 1:08 PM
excelente trabajo .. me gustaria un problema de television ubiera e involuntariamente proyectado por toda la ciudad y que los hombres heterosexuales se transformen .. ME ENCANTA TU ESCRITURA .. QUIERO VER MAS M more ideas more below ... would be great
Evan
12/13/21, 11:22 AM
Outstanding. I admit I faded out for a bit with all the abuse at the start but caught a later chapter and saw the change and HAD to catch up. It helped knowing there was growth coming. But that's on me and not you. This chapter wouldn't have worked if that hadn't happened. Amazing growth and philosophies. Cool lore too. Another piece of great work from you. Thanks for writing such a big, great series. Another one.

12/13/21, 12:29 PM
@Evan yeah I warn people when they get upset about the middle that it is going somewhere, but not many believe me lol So glad you made it through it!
Moe
12/12/21, 9:35 PM
Great story! Had me checking in everyday for updates

12/13/21, 12:28 PM
@Moe glad you liked it
12/12/21, 9:27 PM
Great ride, from beginning to end! Erotic, hot, with subtle dom (& some not so subtle) stuff thrown in. Hope you get a bunch of commissions from this!

12/13/21, 12:28 PM
@kfturner so do I! lol
Bgl
12/12/21, 5:57 PM
great story, i hope we get to go eden

12/13/21, 12:28 PM
@Bgl I hope I find some time too!