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12/14/21, 6:10 AM
You're aware of what website this is, right guy?
12/14/21, 6:04 AM
An amazing story, that plays right into my fantasies. Do you think there might be any more chapters featuring the Coach, Mr Klein and Evan? Thank you for all your great writing.
12/14/21, 4:12 AM
This story was amazing. The seduction and pleasure were very well described. I'm a little doubtful about the full transformation though.
12/14/21, 4:00 AM
Too bad it was so short since it was so good. It could have been interesting to know what happened before, what will happen and the process though.
12/14/21, 3:50 AM
It was interesting this idea of hypnotizing someone else inadvertently and helping him become a better person. I also find it very exciting the parallel between cigar and dick.
12/14/21, 3:40 AM
The flow was really fast but it was well done.
Apr 11, 2017
12/14/21, 2:43 AM
Four years later and this is still one of my favorites.
Dec 12, 2021
Evan
12/14/21, 1:50 AM
The simplification was great. And a cool concept. Seeing Paul as a person with a life he is being removed from to be simple is great and necessary, but I felt that the "hi how are you" chatter wasn't needed. The first half of the story could be halved again, if not more, and still accomplish what the reader needs for a connection. That said, once we get to the mystery guest, it's all tight and fun.
Anonymous
12/14/21, 1:39 AM
cool!! I hope there would be a sequel such that JD Hustler worked with his boss to capture and transform Jimmy’s friend, who try to find and save Jimmy.
12/14/21, 1:27 AM
Love the story, from beginning to end. Great character and development. And hella-hot. But I don't wanna say goodbye to Archie and Gray. I know it's not too likely, but any chance at a follow-up? Their adventures in Eden, together or separate? It's rare to find a story, here or otherwise, that has so much good energy and also passion and good sex. So I don't want to see it end.