Recent Comments

12/12/21, 1:46 PM
A great ending to an excellent story. It sure was a hot, steamy and romantic ride, with great characters one can't help but feel for. You've written some great stories, but this is by farm y favorite. Hope you go back to Eden Academy and we get to see the guys again along a new cast. Keep up the great work, we'll be going along for the ride.

12/13/21, 12:27 PM
@Essex Yeah i hope I find time to get back to it as well.
12/12/21, 1:45 PM
Wow this is one of the best story series I have read so far. I'd love to read another series with Archie and Gray in Eden.

12/13/21, 12:26 PM
@jade Wish my landlord took porn as rent lol
12/12/21, 1:41 PM
Dude, this was a fucking *ride* - great job at the characterization, pacing, slow burn on the worldbuilding, and scorching hot sex scenes. Seriously, this is amazing work and you have every reason to be proud of it!

12/13/21, 12:26 PM
@Dace Thanks man!
Dec 11, 2021
12/13/21, 11:41 AM
Very hot.
Dec 8, 2018
Anonymous
12/13/21, 11:24 AM
Such a hot slow burn story - but the narrator gets there in the end!
12/13/21, 10:44 AM
Fucking hot!
12/13/21, 10:00 AM
Great start! Looking forward to more!
Jack
12/13/21, 9:16 AM
This is a great story! I hope you keep it up!
boi98229
12/13/21, 8:24 AM
@Jack Parker Wow! You just made a surreal experience come to life! That last encounter involving erotic asphyxia reminds me quite a lot of an experience i had at a Body Electric weekend workshop for men, called *"Celebrating the Body Erotic"* [](https://www.bodyelectric.org/CBE-for-Men) where i experienced my one and only full body orgasm. It felt, it seems, much like Archie's fuck fog -- like the brain had slipped halfway into another spiritual dimension while the body felt waves of ecstasy and wildly fluctuating emotions. I love Grayson's dad's brief explanation of male hierarchy and the gifts of different roles. Your story touches and builds on some various real areas of interest. It seems to me this adds a lot of depth and real intrigue to your story. Once again, thank you! Thank you for your imagination, your writing skills, and your willingness to share with the rest of us.