Recent Comments

Jack
12/13/21, 9:16 AM
This is a great story! I hope you keep it up!
boi98229
12/13/21, 8:24 AM
@Jack Parker Wow! You just made a surreal experience come to life! That last encounter involving erotic asphyxia reminds me quite a lot of an experience i had at a Body Electric weekend workshop for men, called *"Celebrating the Body Erotic"* [](https://www.bodyelectric.org/CBE-for-Men) where i experienced my one and only full body orgasm. It felt, it seems, much like Archie's fuck fog -- like the brain had slipped halfway into another spiritual dimension while the body felt waves of ecstasy and wildly fluctuating emotions. I love Grayson's dad's brief explanation of male hierarchy and the gifts of different roles. Your story touches and builds on some various real areas of interest. It seems to me this adds a lot of depth and real intrigue to your story. Once again, thank you! Thank you for your imagination, your writing skills, and your willingness to share with the rest of us.
Mike
12/13/21, 7:54 AM
I love this story, especially the mental conditioning of the father and the brother, I like that you continue with the story is very interesting
boi98229
12/13/21, 6:57 AM
I rated this chapter a little lower just because it stressed me out big time. (Damn Archie is killing me. He just needs to come out and let the chips fall where they may!) ...damn, i gotta go!
12/1/21, 2:17 AM
I'm disappointed Archie didn't remind Dax he begged Gray to breed him too. The vodka enema might have gotten Gray's dick in but it didn't make Dax wrap his legs around Gray. I want that punk brought down, not Archie. Archie might be an arrogant jock but he never asked for that prostate problem!

12/1/21, 2:23 AM
@THAT Steve I love that you're invested in the story dude, everyone gets what's coming to them in the end.

12/1/21, 4:10 PM
@Jack Parker Good! I'm with @THAT Steve on this one.

boi98229
12/13/21, 6:52 AM
@Barney Northrup @Jack Parker Dax is definitely an insensitive jerk, but he is so hot, so smart, and so dominant he gets my pussy twitching so hard i would likely forgive him quite a bit. It's Cooper who is the biggest asshole imho. Even Archie, as big a jerk as he used to be and still is at times, doesn't deserve whatever Cooper would like to do. Cooper just seems vindictive. Okay, that said, I'm off to read the wizard! (btw Thanks, Wiz! Great story!)
boi98229
12/13/21, 6:18 AM
I made a glowing comment after the first chapter or two. After that i felt like the White Rabbit in Alice in Wonderland: No time to say hello. Good-bye. Good-bye. Good-bye. I'm off to the next chapter, and like Archie further down the rabbit hole. Since i came late to the party, i feel i need to keep moving! Needless to say i love the story, and i expect i will comment more specifically after i finish reading the latest chapter. Meanwhile, please allow me to get a little picky and mention that there are a lot of places all along the way where the words were misspelled or the wrong word got used. Here is a short example: *Me hoped towards me and said, “Ok, here we go.”* I assume it was meant to be *He hopped towards me*. The errors generally don't affect understanding much, but it is definitely distracting.
12/13/21, 6:16 AM
The conversion and obliviousness of the process is really well done.
12/13/21, 5:36 AM
Oh, continue more! Love storyline & subject. don't use auto spell check, to many word changes to the wrong words. need proof reading!
12/13/21, 5:29 AM
This story is really exciting and the evolution is well done. I don't understand the utility of already converting his friends, that's my only criticism.
12/13/21, 5:21 AM
that was so sweet! in like a weird, porny way, but still like ...awwwe lol. i would love to read the sequel series. or honestly just whatever you decide to write next. your stories are so hot. and kept me coming (and cumming) back for more.