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boi98229
12/13/21, 6:18 AM
I made a glowing comment after the first chapter or two. After that i felt like the White Rabbit in Alice in Wonderland: No time to say hello. Good-bye. Good-bye. Good-bye. I'm off to the next chapter, and like Archie further down the rabbit hole. Since i came late to the party, i feel i need to keep moving! Needless to say i love the story, and i expect i will comment more specifically after i finish reading the latest chapter. Meanwhile, please allow me to get a little picky and mention that there are a lot of places all along the way where the words were misspelled or the wrong word got used. Here is a short example: *Me hoped towards me and said, “Ok, here we go.”* I assume it was meant to be *He hopped towards me*. The errors generally don't affect understanding much, but it is definitely distracting.
12/13/21, 6:16 AM
The conversion and obliviousness of the process is really well done.
12/13/21, 5:36 AM
Oh, continue more! Love storyline & subject. don't use auto spell check, to many word changes to the wrong words. need proof reading!
12/13/21, 5:29 AM
This story is really exciting and the evolution is well done. I don't understand the utility of already converting his friends, that's my only criticism.
12/13/21, 5:21 AM
that was so sweet! in like a weird, porny way, but still like ...awwwe lol. i would love to read the sequel series. or honestly just whatever you decide to write next. your stories are so hot. and kept me coming (and cumming) back for more.
Apr 27, 2018
12/13/21, 5:16 AM
This story is really nice and the couple is cute. The forging of the relationship thanks to one word was a good idea, plus it worked both ways, making it perfect.
12/13/21, 5:11 AM
This story is well thought and exciting. The destruction of the original relationship is always making me sad even if it's only evoked there (I prefer when we don't know the other party).
12/13/21, 4:07 AM
The first story that made me interested in hypnosis/mind control years ago. It's still working perfectly fine. It contains everything I like, though the start is something that should have put me out (well, I was only searching for gay stories at that time and wasn't aware of my tastes about this kink).

12/13/21, 5:01 AM
@OlrJt Thanks for commenting on this story, I wouldn't have found it otherwise and it's a great one!
12/13/21, 12:29 AM
This was a beautifully written, understated story. You might get a complaint "where's the mind control?", which you should ignore, in my opinion. Seduction and manipulation are "mind control" enough for some stories. Not everything has to be orbital mind control lasers.

12/13/21, 5:01 AM
@amul thanks! Actually the orbital mind control lasers are in the next chapter :)
Oct 1, 2017
12/13/21, 4:57 AM
This story focuses on the description of the process, making it strongly arousing, and shows the results in the end. Well done.