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boi98229
12/13/21, 6:57 AM
I rated this chapter a little lower just because it stressed me out big time. (Damn Archie is killing me. He just needs to come out and let the chips fall where they may!) ...damn, i gotta go!
12/1/21, 2:17 AM
I'm disappointed Archie didn't remind Dax he begged Gray to breed him too. The vodka enema might have gotten Gray's dick in but it didn't make Dax wrap his legs around Gray. I want that punk brought down, not Archie. Archie might be an arrogant jock but he never asked for that prostate problem!

12/1/21, 2:23 AM
@THAT Steve I love that you're invested in the story dude, everyone gets what's coming to them in the end.

12/1/21, 4:10 PM
@Jack Parker Good! I'm with @THAT Steve on this one.

boi98229
12/13/21, 6:52 AM
@Barney Northrup @Jack Parker Dax is definitely an insensitive jerk, but he is so hot, so smart, and so dominant he gets my pussy twitching so hard i would likely forgive him quite a bit. It's Cooper who is the biggest asshole imho. Even Archie, as big a jerk as he used to be and still is at times, doesn't deserve whatever Cooper would like to do. Cooper just seems vindictive. Okay, that said, I'm off to read the wizard! (btw Thanks, Wiz! Great story!)
boi98229
12/13/21, 6:18 AM
I made a glowing comment after the first chapter or two. After that i felt like the White Rabbit in Alice in Wonderland: No time to say hello. Good-bye. Good-bye. Good-bye. I'm off to the next chapter, and like Archie further down the rabbit hole. Since i came late to the party, i feel i need to keep moving! Needless to say i love the story, and i expect i will comment more specifically after i finish reading the latest chapter. Meanwhile, please allow me to get a little picky and mention that there are a lot of places all along the way where the words were misspelled or the wrong word got used. Here is a short example: *Me hoped towards me and said, “Ok, here we go.”* I assume it was meant to be *He hopped towards me*. The errors generally don't affect understanding much, but it is definitely distracting.
12/13/21, 6:16 AM
The conversion and obliviousness of the process is really well done.
12/13/21, 5:36 AM
Oh, continue more! Love storyline & subject. don't use auto spell check, to many word changes to the wrong words. need proof reading!
12/13/21, 5:29 AM
This story is really exciting and the evolution is well done. I don't understand the utility of already converting his friends, that's my only criticism.
12/13/21, 5:21 AM
that was so sweet! in like a weird, porny way, but still like ...awwwe lol. i would love to read the sequel series. or honestly just whatever you decide to write next. your stories are so hot. and kept me coming (and cumming) back for more.
Apr 27, 2018
12/13/21, 5:16 AM
This story is really nice and the couple is cute. The forging of the relationship thanks to one word was a good idea, plus it worked both ways, making it perfect.
12/13/21, 5:11 AM
This story is well thought and exciting. The destruction of the original relationship is always making me sad even if it's only evoked there (I prefer when we don't know the other party).
12/13/21, 4:07 AM
The first story that made me interested in hypnosis/mind control years ago. It's still working perfectly fine. It contains everything I like, though the start is something that should have put me out (well, I was only searching for gay stories at that time and wasn't aware of my tastes about this kink).

12/13/21, 5:01 AM
@OlrJt Thanks for commenting on this story, I wouldn't have found it otherwise and it's a great one!