Recent Comments

12/13/21, 12:29 AM
This was a beautifully written, understated story. You might get a complaint "where's the mind control?", which you should ignore, in my opinion. Seduction and manipulation are "mind control" enough for some stories. Not everything has to be orbital mind control lasers.

12/13/21, 5:01 AM
@amul thanks! Actually the orbital mind control lasers are in the next chapter :)
Oct 1, 2017
12/13/21, 4:57 AM
This story focuses on the description of the process, making it strongly arousing, and shows the results in the end. Well done.
12/13/21, 4:49 AM
This story is very short since you go straight to the point but also very exciting. They make a cute couple. I would have loved to see the evolution of Chase while taking the supplements and working out though.
12/13/21, 4:40 AM
This story is well done. The progression is fine and the struggles of Jonathan aren't that strong, showing nothing is done in a harmful way. The pleasure they feel is also described very well.
12/13/21, 4:20 AM
This story was cute. I also appreciated that Ted wasn't a jerk using his ability to hurt Jeremy. Plus, the description of the work on the feet and the pleasure felt by Jeremy was really well done and arousing.
Aug 19, 2010
12/13/21, 4:15 AM
This story is really cute, though I usually hate when relationships are destroyed but here, it's not like he doesn't like her anymore, but more like he likes his professor more. I also appreciate the absence of dumbing down and that he stays himself.
Whitewolf78
12/13/21, 3:51 AM
I've not been this invested in a story for a very long time so congrats! It was emotional, sexy, funny sad. And had an up lifting ending and very much felt like a story where everyone got what they deserved. I really would love to read about their time at Eden and the friends and enemies they make there. My mind is already running wild with ideas. (if you need any happy to help) But if you don't still think it's the perfect ending to an amazing story!
12/13/21, 2:10 AM
Agree with all the comments above, fantastic series. Fun, hot, powerful sex. And a great ending that shows character growth. Not many stories deliver all that!
12/13/21, 1:01 AM
Interesting story. Nice start. I like the slow and steady approach with a clear cut element of something is going on. So yeah sexy.
12/13/21, 12:56 AM
Nicely written.