Recent Comments

12/13/21, 4:20 AM
This story was cute. I also appreciated that Ted wasn't a jerk using his ability to hurt Jeremy. Plus, the description of the work on the feet and the pleasure felt by Jeremy was really well done and arousing.
Aug 19, 2010
12/13/21, 4:15 AM
This story is really cute, though I usually hate when relationships are destroyed but here, it's not like he doesn't like her anymore, but more like he likes his professor more. I also appreciate the absence of dumbing down and that he stays himself.
Whitewolf78
12/13/21, 3:51 AM
I've not been this invested in a story for a very long time so congrats! It was emotional, sexy, funny sad. And had an up lifting ending and very much felt like a story where everyone got what they deserved. I really would love to read about their time at Eden and the friends and enemies they make there. My mind is already running wild with ideas. (if you need any happy to help) But if you don't still think it's the perfect ending to an amazing story!
12/13/21, 2:10 AM
Agree with all the comments above, fantastic series. Fun, hot, powerful sex. And a great ending that shows character growth. Not many stories deliver all that!
12/13/21, 1:01 AM
Interesting story. Nice start. I like the slow and steady approach with a clear cut element of something is going on. So yeah sexy.
12/13/21, 12:56 AM
Nicely written.
Anonymous
12/13/21, 12:36 AM
I love this! Such a hot study, I can't wait to see what Sam does to Bill next.
12/12/21, 11:24 PM
Masterful storytelling. Very hot, romantic, disturbing and thought provoking. Nature. Nurture. Dominance. Submission. Sex vs. love. Ownership. Possession. Surrender. Great, great work. Thank you!
12/12/21, 7:34 PM
The positives: Story is really kinky and hot (and depraved). The company you've created for these stories is right out of the darkest kind of fantasies that kinksters like us wank to, and you did a real good job evoking it. The fact that Steve is basically a zombie (and the company didn't intentionally drown him) make it a bit more palatable although this is still guilty erection territory. The negative: I don't find that the pictures add anything to the story. Not to my taste, and the passage about the kid on the side of the road seemed to serve no purpose other than to allow that first picture to be inserted where it really had nothing to do with the story. The second photo set was ostensibly connected with the story, but I found that the anime style clashed harshly with the story as you wrote it, and the very detailed and evocative medical bondage scene you described was not depicted in the drawings, which were much more generic BDSM. There are much better ways to share kinky photos than having them interspersed with erotic fiction. You should try the GSS discord for that, among many others. Your writing is strong enough on its own to stand on its own.

Dylan
12/12/21, 11:17 PM
@amul Thx for your thoughts! About your "negative" remarks: I guess two readers, two opinions. Two authors, a million ideas ;-) Actually i still try out ideas and always want to ad something new , so many ideas might be failures.... Please go on with commenting, its always interesting.
12/12/21, 4:35 PM
"word of mouth advertising" would be grammatically correct, but "mouth to mouth advertising" is hotter, isn't it? :-)

Dylan
12/12/21, 11:10 PM
@Exh8bslut You are absolutely right in both points ;-)