Recent Comments

12/12/21, 11:24 PM
Masterful storytelling. Very hot, romantic, disturbing and thought provoking. Nature. Nurture. Dominance. Submission. Sex vs. love. Ownership. Possession. Surrender. Great, great work. Thank you!
12/12/21, 7:34 PM
The positives: Story is really kinky and hot (and depraved). The company you've created for these stories is right out of the darkest kind of fantasies that kinksters like us wank to, and you did a real good job evoking it. The fact that Steve is basically a zombie (and the company didn't intentionally drown him) make it a bit more palatable although this is still guilty erection territory. The negative: I don't find that the pictures add anything to the story. Not to my taste, and the passage about the kid on the side of the road seemed to serve no purpose other than to allow that first picture to be inserted where it really had nothing to do with the story. The second photo set was ostensibly connected with the story, but I found that the anime style clashed harshly with the story as you wrote it, and the very detailed and evocative medical bondage scene you described was not depicted in the drawings, which were much more generic BDSM. There are much better ways to share kinky photos than having them interspersed with erotic fiction. You should try the GSS discord for that, among many others. Your writing is strong enough on its own to stand on its own.

Dylan
12/12/21, 11:17 PM
@amul Thx for your thoughts! About your "negative" remarks: I guess two readers, two opinions. Two authors, a million ideas ;-) Actually i still try out ideas and always want to ad something new , so many ideas might be failures.... Please go on with commenting, its always interesting.
12/12/21, 4:35 PM
"word of mouth advertising" would be grammatically correct, but "mouth to mouth advertising" is hotter, isn't it? :-)

Dylan
12/12/21, 11:10 PM
@Exh8bslut You are absolutely right in both points ;-)
Martin
12/12/21, 10:52 PM
What a wonderful legacy story written by z119z!
12/12/21, 8:58 PM
thx for posting!! great as fuck.. inspiration and more. great description of transformation
12/12/21, 8:23 PM
excellent! love it! totally horny
12/12/21, 8:10 PM
great writing! sincerely hope you'll continue as a series. i would gladly pay foe a series of this quality and imagination. superb!!
12/12/21, 8:02 PM
This is great! Can't wait for more
12/12/21, 7:59 PM
I just keep coming back to this story, it's so good. I'd gladly let someone give me this "curse"!
Anonymous
12/12/21, 7:40 PM
Absolutely stellar writing. Truly, one of the best on this site.