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12/12/21, 7:32 AM
Really great story. I would have preferred some of the transformation to have been subtler, not having the barber telegraph every change explicitly, and perhaps skipping the piss and rubber shirt. I would also have made the barber a bit more professional, skipping the shoe and hookup at the end, and instead have him kicked out still in a state of shock. As he is walking home he is struggling with conflicting emotions being horrified he is at his changes, in disbelief it even was possible and happened, despair about how to revert it, and incredibly turned on by it all. Then he meets the scally group again on his way back and finds them irresistable. I always find it interesting to read different people describe changes for a stereotype, like the shape of the head, the neck, the tattoos. Always an inspiration when you try to describe something yourself.
12/12/21, 6:42 AM
I really liked how this wrapped up. You are a truly good storyteller and I look forward to seeing that you have posted something new. You surprise me with your imaginative and innovative take on often tired cliché genres. I'm DEFINITELY a fan!
12/11/21, 6:22 AM
well i can say a lot of ideas come to my mind but i like how you are developing this i also like good endings sometime but i have to vote for A leave Dickson city into slavery so in some way finally his father and family end abusing him in someway but since the entrance of tech on story i would like Dylan end more as a Prototype of an High Tech Slave more controlled by devices like collar and machinery or electronics more than the Fruit Pounch also maybe him be almost totally aware of what happening to him at that moment, maybe the doctors on story can make it possible and also he can be like a testing product for new sexual devices to be launch to the market

Dylan
12/11/21, 8:55 AM
@Bazir I guess you are aware that i changed the title of this line of stories some chapters ago into " A Dickson Enterprises Story : Dylan " I see a future of more " A Dickson Enterprises Story : XXXX " stories. We already met some possible characters, right? ;-) So new task for anyone who likes to help: Any suggestions ? You guys might wanna check the stories for : Johnny, who got his physicals together with me; Steve, the boy were the fruitpunch didn't work; Ryan the quarterback; Jose, Dylans buddy; Sammy, hitchhiker boy who was worked over by the Artimes twins; Jackie, Buddy from school, altarboy ; Vinnie, Jackies cousin in church dungeon; The asian boy in church dungeon; Jeremy, black boy 22yo, sold earlier as sex slave to german billionair; TBC;-) maybe

12/12/21, 6:16 AM
@Dylan ok then would be good Dylan end as i think, but i think maybe more fitting is Steve the boy that the fruitpunch didn’t work fit well for the setting i have said: end more as a test subject for the developing and testing of new tech in Dickson City and finally becoming a robotized slave with some modifications in the mouth and anus to convert him into the ultimate sex machine
RN
12/12/21, 5:06 AM
This is like one of my most favorite stories ever. It seems like it's almost done though. Is there gonna be a plot twist at the end? I'm excited to see what's gonna happen.
12/12/21, 4:55 AM
Not usually a furry fan, but this pushed a lot of buttons for me. Hope more exploration of the world Dr Mogrif is creating will be posted soon.
12/12/21, 1:58 AM
Any continuation?
12/10/21, 3:01 PM
Oh my god, I had so much fun with this! It was hot the whole way through and you kept up the erotic tempo well while also leaving me curious about what was actually going on. And the *cum inflation,* damn, you hit so many of my buttons with it, especially with the force of Courage’s cumshots. I’m loving this idea of cozy-but-hard kinks. And I’m loving the dynamic of a Courage who’s oblivious to what’s going on (maybe?) while Dr. Darkness knows everything, and Courage still can’t tell—it’s so cute and mind-bending. Looking forward to more!

12/11/21, 9:55 PM
Thanks! I'm glad the balance of wholesome and kinky hit home. Certainly never something I expected to be writing on GSS. @Soren Fitz

12/11/21, 10:41 PM
I’m stating a revolution of wholesomeness! Thanks for joining me with this story, haha. @bluesuedewho
12/11/21, 6:54 PM
Hot one! Loved the way Nate is driven by the program to take over Tom and then act out everything as a passenger of his own body until his mind finally "clicked" into the reprogramming. I have to say I'm not into fem-boys, but in this situation it didn't really matter that much...actually the way you described Tom as a geeky gamer is still pretty hot and enjoyable for me. Of course, I love all the foot and family actions! I look forward to how big brother Jack and dad will fall under the program's control and become a foot-loving incestuous family! ;)

12/11/21, 10:32 PM
@tomozco Thank you! Yeah that's what I was going for, I wanted some of Nate being forced to act on autopilot (because that's hot) and then some of him actually wanting to do the things (because that's also obviously hot) - I wanted both sides of the hypno. Thank you for keeping an open mind and reading anyway even though you're not into one of the characters, but like you say when there's this much foot action it makes up for it ;) and yeah I wanted the gaming to be a big part of their personality as well! Hehe thank you, yes don't worry i have plenty of family foot fun in mind, if anything the hypnosis of the various family members that we're seeing now is just foreplay for the incestuous foot worship that will soon occur ;)
Anonymous
12/11/21, 3:49 PM
I can't tell you how much I loved this story, I read it 3 times. Thank you so much for it, and we all hope to read more :)

12/11/21, 10:04 PM
Thanks! I have a couple other stories that will probably get updated first, but there's definitely enough interest for me to continue this one at some point! @
Anonymous
12/11/21, 5:07 AM
This is awesome! Stereotypical comic stuff, reality changes, mind-meltingly hot sex, and wonderful amounts of wholesome fluff and romance?!! It's everything I love at once!!! MORE!!!

12/11/21, 10:04 PM
Thanks! It's not the kind of thing I ever expected to write, so I'm glad people are enjoying it! @