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12/11/21, 7:16 AM
It's a bit of a mindfuck that this mimbo muscle whore still has brains enough to write so eloquently in his personal logs. lol That was a great epilogue. Although, nowadays, a cop kneeling on a perp's neck has different connotations compared to 2005 when you wrote this.

12/11/21, 11:08 AM
@PEN15LUVR That didn't stop anyone from complaining about it. Yes, i wrote it 15 years ago but it has triggered quite a number of people. That's a shame -- it's just fiction.
12/11/21, 7:45 AM
Great story! Love the point of view from the genie.
12/11/21, 7:42 AM
God this is so great. I am loving every chapter of these
12/11/21, 6:38 AM
OMG that's only Chapter One! Hot hot hot! And also, because I'm a perfectionist, in describing how the cop walked back to your car, it should be a confident gait, not gate. Unless he's corralling otters in his pants, then who am I to judge?
Anonymous
12/11/21, 6:13 AM
interesting idea, but not far left to go. Matthew's mind is gone, as is the resistance . i enjoy the fight or struggle more. Others will probably find later chapters with him enslaved better. But not me. good luck
12/11/21, 4:07 AM
I screamed at the "massive touch screen" of his iPhone4. I feel so old, God...
12/11/21, 2:29 AM
Do you have anything on Kindle?

12/11/21, 2:53 AM
@THAT Steve nope, i dont think they take my kind of stories.

12/11/21, 3:03 AM
@Jack Parker Kyle Cicero has a bunch I've found
12/11/21, 1:05 AM
Oh HELLS yeah! I'm loving this Archie and Gray team-up. Great job, man! I'm excited to see where it goes from here!

12/11/21, 1:38 AM
@Dace Thanks man, I know it's rough in the middle but you have to fall before you can stand up again :)
12/8/21, 10:55 PM
My favorite story series on this whole website, I come back to it over and over.

12/11/21, 1:10 AM
@Lux Phallus glad you enjoyed it. I do have more half done, but they ran out of juice.
Jockmorphr
12/11/21, 12:55 AM
Wow this story just keeps getting better and better! I love the situation you've created and the descriptions of both characters' bodies is really hot. I'd love to hear more about how Danny has grown. Can he still fit in his clothes? And has he gotten bigger overall or more muscular. It sounds like his junk has grown quite a bit, but it would be cool to hear it from his perspective. He seems like he'd be the type to want to lord his new size over Jacob!