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12/10/21, 11:07 PM
Love this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens to Mike after he has a talk with Amir.
12/10/21, 11:03 PM
What an incredible story. I love the exploration of Chance's psychology, and how learning more about him gives Todd the chance to be kinder/more empathetic, too. And the masturbation scene was ACHINGLY hot...I could feel the tension and huge release. Fantastic work!
12/10/21, 10:52 PM
This chapter is hot to read. Love the part at the club & the end with the two new heroes. I wonder what will happen with them around. They seem to know what is going on with Mr.Dickson & is company. Can't wait for the next chapter.
12/10/21, 10:43 PM
Keep 'em coming (or in the case of boys, not cumming), please. i'm enjoying the heck out of this one.
12/10/21, 10:33 PM
Fantastic, in my mind *classic* story. The original ending of part 4 was a little unsatisfying, though very hot. This follow up and epilogue made the story much better and more enjoyable overall. The fantasy holds up to a re-read, and has for over a decade now. Love revisiting this one!
12/10/21, 9:18 PM
Liking this...just hope the wannabe hero doesn't fall into the trap as well.
12/10/21, 7:36 PM
This is a fun story! What were your assigned tags? Robot and shaving? Kudos to you for staying so near the word count! You're the only one close so far!

12/10/21, 8:15 PM
@Norismo Thank you! My tags were incest and robots i didnt go too in depth on the incest as i normally would, but i kind like the direction i went
12/10/21, 4:29 PM
Does CD exist during 1980s?

Martin
12/10/21, 4:38 PM
@JRZTT I've bought my first CD in 1984. So, yes :)
12/7/21, 10:58 PM
With those tags I didn't expect to enjoy this as much as I did. And I loved the twist at the end. I also enjoyed having to write to tags I wouldn't normally. It allowed me to explore new areas through my writing. Awesome job man, and you were much closer to the word limit suggestion.

12/7/21, 11:02 PM
@Lusty Stallion It's such a fun challenge, isn't it! I never would have written this without being assigned the tags. I wonder if anyone will be under the word count? 😂

12/10/21, 4:21 PM
@Norismo That is a very good question that I would love to see the answer to!
Cracker
12/10/21, 11:07 AM
nice

JockTopper
12/10/21, 3:47 PM
Thanks @Cracker!