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12/10/21, 9:18 PM
Liking this...just hope the wannabe hero doesn't fall into the trap as well.
12/10/21, 7:36 PM
This is a fun story! What were your assigned tags? Robot and shaving? Kudos to you for staying so near the word count! You're the only one close so far!

12/10/21, 8:15 PM
@Norismo Thank you! My tags were incest and robots i didnt go too in depth on the incest as i normally would, but i kind like the direction i went
12/10/21, 4:29 PM
Does CD exist during 1980s?

Martin
12/10/21, 4:38 PM
@JRZTT I've bought my first CD in 1984. So, yes :)
12/7/21, 10:58 PM
With those tags I didn't expect to enjoy this as much as I did. And I loved the twist at the end. I also enjoyed having to write to tags I wouldn't normally. It allowed me to explore new areas through my writing. Awesome job man, and you were much closer to the word limit suggestion.

12/7/21, 11:02 PM
@Lusty Stallion It's such a fun challenge, isn't it! I never would have written this without being assigned the tags. I wonder if anyone will be under the word count? 😂

12/10/21, 4:21 PM
@Norismo That is a very good question that I would love to see the answer to!
Cracker
12/10/21, 11:07 AM
nice

JockTopper
12/10/21, 3:47 PM
Thanks @Cracker!
12/10/21, 3:40 AM
I loved seeing more of Talley and Ariel here! I also appreciate all the redhead representation in your stories. They're underrepresented in erotica, I think! I really like the sound of those two WIPs too...

12/10/21, 3:09 PM
I absolutely adore redheads, so this is definitely par for the course for me! I almost didn’t have a redhead protagonist for this story until I came up with Talley. Looking forward to putting both WIPs out… eventually! I’m so busy, haha, but I’m working away. @bluesuedewho
12/9/21, 9:49 PM
My interest and curiosity is peeked, I hope we can see more hero/villain couples and how they are living in the new rea9

12/10/21, 3:02 AM
Glad it was interesting! @darkblade2814

12/10/21, 2:55 PM
@bluesuedewho the final part of the comment is incomplete, what i meant was: I hope we can see more hero/villain couples and how they are living in the new reality
Dec 9, 2021
12/10/21, 12:08 AM
This is great! It's a fun, hot concept, and I hope you continue to explore it.

12/10/21, 2:39 PM
@PTutius27 maybe... I feel like I just write something and move onto the next idea because I get tired of stories easily lol. Glad you enjoyed it :)
Dec 9, 2021
Evan
12/10/21, 4:52 AM
Great story idea!

12/10/21, 2:38 PM
@Evan <3 thank you <3
Dec 9, 2021
12/9/21, 11:35 PM
Loved this one. I know I keep saying this, but it bears repeating: your writing just keeps getting better. This was a wonderfully fleshed out story and it was not overly long, I didn't mind the build up and the mystery of what was going to happen. The foreshadowing with the customer in the sporting goods store was great. The payoff was sexy and fun, whatever this virus is, it couldn't have affected the two main characters in a more complimentary way.

12/10/21, 2:37 PM
@amul Thank you so much!!! I really appreciate hearing that lmao. Glad that the payoff and foreshadowing was evident - i tried being subtle about the development of fetishes after using the toothbrush.