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3/7/25, 8:35 AM
The part where he gets a fetish repeats itself, " "Whoa boy,” I said, grabbing his shoulder before he got away. " the entire small scene repeats, if that's intentional, or a mistake just let me know and I can go ahead and approve the story

3/7/25, 4:10 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Total mistake, I’ve made the edit and removed it, thanks for the catch!
3/7/25, 3:56 PM
I’m hoping that there’s more to this.
3/7/25, 3:41 PM
I guess you can't rush greatness, though I would if I could. There's a lot to noodle through here, not to mention a lot of fun. First, as before, I love being in Dusk's head, and the insight we get into his transition from a hero to supervillain’s superdrone slave. We know the basic change is voluntary, but in light of Onyx's musing on Brainwashing and Master's ability to do it, I'd wager that a lot of his submission and negation of self and slave mentality is more brainwashing than Archie’s natural tendencies. That said, it does seem that Archie was an enthusiastic participant in his own brainwashing. Then there's Jamie. Somehow, it doesn’t seem like seeing Dusk's origin story is a particularly good way to soothe his fear of Master turning him into a mindless puppet slave, since he got to see Archie becoming exactly that. But if he bothers to think about of it, he'll realize that even with all he saw, Archie is still there under all the Dusk, and still very much himself. Still, Jamie’s analogy of the "choice" he's been given to two doors with one of them set on fire is so spot on. Why was Master so pleased with what Dusk accomplished in the dream meeting, and what exactly was Dusk right about? Was Master's satisfaction just from Dusk/Archie putting the first cracks in Jamie's "NO"? Moving on, do you think Dusk is going to be pissed at Onyx's sexual use of Jamie? Or will he recognize it as furthering the cause of bringing Jamie under Master's control? Milo/DH-003's interaction with Kane is priceless. I love the way DH-003's mask falls away as soon as Kane is lost in the Network. Kane even deserves a lot of his contempt. And the memory transmitting buttplug is a truly creative and fun device. That's it for starters, though I'll likely have more to say, and would love to see thoughts and theories from everyone.
Anonymous
3/7/25, 1:53 PM
I love it, thank you!
3/7/25, 12:18 PM
Insanely hot.
Anonymous
3/7/25, 11:44 AM
Enjoying this series very much as I've enjoyed and put your other story on my favorite list! You're a great writer!
3/7/25, 8:32 AM
The much awaited continuation is finally here and it was really good too! Kinda sad Kane isnt gonna get the full superslave treatment. I know he's been an asshole the whole time and treated Jamie like a real jerk, but I was hoping he'd get a redemption arc and the two would end of friends and bond as they both fall to the master's control. Oh well, hopefully he'll do a good job as a mole and help expose the leagues corruption
3/7/25, 7:16 AM
I was worried that this story was done for. But alas, it is not and holy hell was it a good chapter. Eager to read more!
Niko
3/6/25, 11:11 PM
I've been fiddling with AI picture generation myself, lately. May I ask which AI generator you're using? Currently, I use https://perchance.org/ai-text-to-image-generator, but it's not perfect...

3/7/25, 6:06 AM
@[Niko](/user/show/992975) promptchan, but even that isn't perfect. I had to generate multiple images just to get one that kinda meets my description.
3/7/25, 5:06 AM
I wonder who is doing this to him