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Dec 9, 2021
12/9/21, 11:35 PM
Loved this one. I know I keep saying this, but it bears repeating: your writing just keeps getting better. This was a wonderfully fleshed out story and it was not overly long, I didn't mind the build up and the mystery of what was going to happen. The foreshadowing with the customer in the sporting goods store was great. The payoff was sexy and fun, whatever this virus is, it couldn't have affected the two main characters in a more complimentary way.

12/10/21, 2:37 PM
@amul Thank you so much!!! I really appreciate hearing that lmao. Glad that the payoff and foreshadowing was evident - i tried being subtle about the development of fetishes after using the toothbrush.
Dec 9, 2021
Rubber_Lover14
12/9/21, 9:42 PM
I like the concept, but i dont think it would suit as a stand alone. Personally, i can see it going in many directions. They continue the way they are and the virus slowly spreads, the relationship staying the same, or maybe the virus mutates and ramps up. They could gain more kinks (armpit fetish, bondage fetish, enslavement fetish to name afew). It has great potential. I could see chris's condition worsening to the point where its not just Domination in terms of sex. He could want to dominate James completely. Or they could get cured. Or they could gain new fetishes. Or their current fetishes could get more pronounced. Id love to see more parts to this story. It could get even better given more chapters

12/10/21, 2:36 PM
@Rubber_Lover14 ahah so true - I feel like i'm just bad at sequels in general. These are some great directions to go, I might come back and write more for this in the future.
Dec 9, 2021
12/9/21, 8:24 PM
Slow burn till the end before the reveal. It was good but felt like we were just getting started. If this was just a one-off, there was too much superfluous dialogue (e.g., conversation with the guy buying shoes that didn't actually advance the narrative). Don't get me wrong, I liked it. I think you have a novel concept that definitely warrants further exploration.

12/10/21, 2:34 PM
@Barney Northrup totally get what you're saying with the superfluous dialogue - the shoe guy was kind of padding, kind of trying to show james slowly develop a foot fetish. So happy to hear the concept is cool! I'll keep some idea in mind for continuation if I ever think of it
12/10/21, 1:58 PM
can't wait for more.
12/10/21, 1:44 PM
Hope there is more too it.
12/10/21, 12:53 PM
woo, really enjoy reading the story and cannt wait to see what will happen to Dylan.
Dec 9, 2021
Anonymous
12/10/21, 12:08 PM
expanding.... James really submitting to Chris and Chris' dominance change growing into beard, smoking, language, leather, Dom guy
12/10/21, 9:48 AM
very hot as per usual and loving the development of the story. Hopefully Danni and Rikki will get to have their friend back new and improved!
12/10/21, 8:48 AM
love it so cute, wholesome but still erotic. hope we get to see the 2 baby pups have some 1 on 1. Also weird this doesn't show up in my feed.
12/10/21, 3:34 AM
Love the Ariel and Talley dynamic! (Also, oooh! New class/caste...)

12/10/21, 8:45 AM
Talley as a character basically came out of nowhere and stole my heart. I’m glad you’re enjoying how he interacts with Ariel! Also, yeah, Sirens are tons of fun. It’s going to be fun continuing to flesh them out and show them off. Thanks for continuing to read! @bluesuedewho