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Cracker
12/10/21, 11:07 AM
nice

JockTopper
12/10/21, 3:47 PM
Thanks @Cracker!
12/10/21, 3:40 AM
I loved seeing more of Talley and Ariel here! I also appreciate all the redhead representation in your stories. They're underrepresented in erotica, I think! I really like the sound of those two WIPs too...

12/10/21, 3:09 PM
I absolutely adore redheads, so this is definitely par for the course for me! I almost didn’t have a redhead protagonist for this story until I came up with Talley. Looking forward to putting both WIPs out… eventually! I’m so busy, haha, but I’m working away. @bluesuedewho
12/9/21, 9:49 PM
My interest and curiosity is peeked, I hope we can see more hero/villain couples and how they are living in the new rea9

12/10/21, 3:02 AM
Glad it was interesting! @darkblade2814

12/10/21, 2:55 PM
@bluesuedewho the final part of the comment is incomplete, what i meant was: I hope we can see more hero/villain couples and how they are living in the new reality
Dec 9, 2021
12/10/21, 12:08 AM
This is great! It's a fun, hot concept, and I hope you continue to explore it.

12/10/21, 2:39 PM
@PTutius27 maybe... I feel like I just write something and move onto the next idea because I get tired of stories easily lol. Glad you enjoyed it :)
Dec 9, 2021
Evan
12/10/21, 4:52 AM
Great story idea!

12/10/21, 2:38 PM
@Evan <3 thank you <3
Dec 9, 2021
12/9/21, 11:35 PM
Loved this one. I know I keep saying this, but it bears repeating: your writing just keeps getting better. This was a wonderfully fleshed out story and it was not overly long, I didn't mind the build up and the mystery of what was going to happen. The foreshadowing with the customer in the sporting goods store was great. The payoff was sexy and fun, whatever this virus is, it couldn't have affected the two main characters in a more complimentary way.

12/10/21, 2:37 PM
@amul Thank you so much!!! I really appreciate hearing that lmao. Glad that the payoff and foreshadowing was evident - i tried being subtle about the development of fetishes after using the toothbrush.
Dec 9, 2021
Rubber_Lover14
12/9/21, 9:42 PM
I like the concept, but i dont think it would suit as a stand alone. Personally, i can see it going in many directions. They continue the way they are and the virus slowly spreads, the relationship staying the same, or maybe the virus mutates and ramps up. They could gain more kinks (armpit fetish, bondage fetish, enslavement fetish to name afew). It has great potential. I could see chris's condition worsening to the point where its not just Domination in terms of sex. He could want to dominate James completely. Or they could get cured. Or they could gain new fetishes. Or their current fetishes could get more pronounced. Id love to see more parts to this story. It could get even better given more chapters

12/10/21, 2:36 PM
@Rubber_Lover14 ahah so true - I feel like i'm just bad at sequels in general. These are some great directions to go, I might come back and write more for this in the future.
Dec 9, 2021
12/9/21, 8:24 PM
Slow burn till the end before the reveal. It was good but felt like we were just getting started. If this was just a one-off, there was too much superfluous dialogue (e.g., conversation with the guy buying shoes that didn't actually advance the narrative). Don't get me wrong, I liked it. I think you have a novel concept that definitely warrants further exploration.

12/10/21, 2:34 PM
@Barney Northrup totally get what you're saying with the superfluous dialogue - the shoe guy was kind of padding, kind of trying to show james slowly develop a foot fetish. So happy to hear the concept is cool! I'll keep some idea in mind for continuation if I ever think of it
12/10/21, 1:58 PM
can't wait for more.
12/10/21, 1:44 PM
Hope there is more too it.