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Anonymous
12/10/21, 12:42 AM
absolutely love this idea! excited to see where this is going!

12/10/21, 3:01 AM
Thanks! @
12/9/21, 8:32 PM
This is cute, adorable, funny, sweet, and SUPER hot! I hope you keep writing this one!

12/10/21, 2:59 AM
Thanks! I have more ideas, but I wanted to gauge interest for this kind of story before spending a lot more time on it. @Hypno_boy
12/8/21, 7:53 PM
I'm one of the few people who gave mixed feedback on Part 1, but I think that Part 2 is so much better. Even though I'm not particularly into all the sock fetish stuff, all the descriptions of Nate acting unconsciously according to the app's programming had me rock hard. I hope that in the next part we get to see some of Nate and Tom teaming up to ensnare either their dad or big brother.

12/9/21, 11:11 PM
@Hypnothrill yes, I did have your feedback in mind while planning out this part, so thank you for helping inform my writing. i'm really glad you like it, and i hope you ensure the future chapters ;)

12/10/21, 12:04 AM
@FKH19 *enjoy
May 14, 2008
moo
12/9/21, 11:44 PM
fuck. everything about this was hot!
12/9/21, 8:16 AM
this series is coming along really nicely I can't wait to see Jack next. Ar least,that's what I think. Daddy is probably a tougher nut to crack

12/9/21, 11:24 PM
@ForgottenCradle thank you so much! hm, i think you might be right. I do wonder how daddy will be hypnotised ;)
12/8/21, 10:58 PM
This is so hot! Can't wait for the next part! I hope the dad ends as a foot slave too, serving his sons in a new and wonderful way <3

12/9/21, 11:23 PM
@Udems thank you! hehe who knows what the family will end up doing ;)
EJG
12/8/21, 10:25 PM
Though i'm not a huge fan of foot fetish, i liked this. I'm more into sweaty pits and hairy chests,and dare i say it,sweaty asses.,My own private fantasy would be for Tom to shift into a more masculine muscular Alpha defined character getting all shot and sweaty jock bro like Jack,as Nate becomes the slutty fem one,but thats a fantasy my head,not yours. Nonetheless,cannot wait for upcoming chapters

12/9/21, 11:22 PM
@EJG i can definitely get on board with the first part of your comment ;) that is a hot idea, but i think i'm gonna explore more of the character archtypes as theyve already been established, instead of turning them into something else. but thabk gou for the feedback! maybe there will be slight personality changed in future installments, who knows ;)
12/9/21, 10:30 PM
My personal feeling... 'B'...I like happy endings, or at least 'equitable' ones...where you can't necessarily undo what's been done (partially or completely), but there is at least a closure where the perpetrators get their comeuppance and the victim(s) (in this case Dylan and the other boys) can lead some semblance of a normal life, albeit far from what they might have imagined their life before being taken off the rails.

Dylan
12/9/21, 11:21 PM
@Aaelefein B ..one ;-) Thx
12/8/21, 10:22 PM
What a fantastic story idea. Very orginal and well written. I'm not really a feet guy, but I agree that socks can be very hot. I like how you have the various characters wearing different styles of socks. Variety is great in stories like this. I don't know if you are into this fetish or not, but I think it is a perfect pairing to what you are writing. One of the hottest things I think are cute guys who are in their socks, underwear, and like a t-shirt. Seems like a perfect scenario for Jack. Just an idea that I thought you could throw out. You could hook lots more people adding more fetishes that compliment your feet/sock fetish. I'd be happy to give you some ideas or suggestions if you want them. Great job and excellent story.

12/9/21, 11:20 PM
@Kaleb C. thank you so much! i'm so glad you like it. i think im going to save other fetishes for any future stories i decide to do, but yes please feel free to message me with any ideas you'd like to share :) i'm so glad you like the story!
Rubber_Lover14
12/8/21, 10:00 PM
As with the previous story, this is super hot. I think its much better than the first story. However, i would like to say that there was one minor problem with the story in my opinion. The thing i found to be an issue was calling the feet cheesy. Idk. Ive always found the use of cheesy and vinegary to be off putting and a bit of a turn off. Other than that, i really enjoyed the story. I cant wait to see what happens next. One hope is that, while nate seemed to be the one in control here, when jack and their father gets involved, he won't be as in control. After all, what could be kinkier than his big sweaty daddy showing him his rightful place? One final thing. I think it would be cool that, while the hypnosis seems to make all of them love feel/musk, perhaps each of the family members has preferences for different kinks? Like tom is a submissive femboy that likes feet, especially now that hes hypnotised. The father could be into bondage or degradation (doing it to others rather than taking it), or maybe jack is into spanking his sub or pet play. I think them having a varied set of interests would be interesting. Maybe the hypnosis amplifies existing kinks while adding more? Maybe it makes it so kinks are passed on and amplified. Like tom was hypnotised first, and now his foot fetish is being spread to the family. Nate might be very vanilla, so he had no kinks to add. But that could change once the others experience the hypnosis. Idk, just a thought i had Anyways. Good job! Can't wait for part 3

12/9/21, 11:19 PM
@Rubber_Lover14 thanks for your feedback, and i'm actually with you 100%! i also don't care for the food comparisons, i just put a couple in this chapter for the people who do like them :) as for other fetishes, i do like the idea but i think i'd like to explore it more in any potential future stories i do. there will definitely be further exploration of other kinks in this series e.g dom/sub etc but i'm mostly gonna keep it feet/socks with other sex thrown in. thank you for the feedback and i hope you love the future chapters! :)