Recent Comments

Martin
12/9/21, 8:28 PM
Please don't let us wait too long! This hypno scene made me hard and I want to read more!

12/10/21, 3:15 AM
Thank you so much, @Martin — Sorry for the delay. I've been preoccupied by FFXIV: Endwalker of late. XD

Martin
12/10/21, 7:20 AM
@Ethan White Understandable. I've preordered it months ago, but I don't even have the time to start to play it. And I'm far behind in the Story anyway... Have fun! I envy you a bit :) Still, I hope you'll find the time to write again, soon! /Edit: Oops. Just realized that you already submitted the next chapter. Well then, I know what I'm gonna do this evening! 😜
12/10/21, 5:19 AM
Love the plot, but was really looking forward to Joe (and Zakary)'s minds being melted & broken by the milk. And their panic as they realise, and their joy at being made huge. Definitely more to work with.
12/10/21, 4:40 AM
a Stradivarius of passion!!!!!!!!
JockTopper
12/10/21, 3:32 AM
Thanks Seeker
12/9/21, 10:51 PM
I saw your new story posted and realized that I never commented on this one. I love how willingly Rob has gone along with the changes the ghosts (but I'm still not convinced they're actually ghosts) have done. And I like that he left an artifact for Tweedale to study, presumably to help the ghosts corrupt him, too. But I do have to say I'm not liking Alan. I don't think I'm necessarily supposed to like him, though. I just really want to see his comeuppance. Also, I think Gatekeeper might be my new favorite ghost. I have a feeling that we still have more to meet, though, and I look forward to that.

12/10/21, 3:14 AM
I won't spoil anything, but you're definitely picking up on some hints. Alan definitely has some karma coming his way. Glad you liked Gatekeeper! There's another servant (hinted at in this chapter) introduced in the next installment. @Proteus
12/9/21, 8:50 PM
Snugglebutt ❤

12/10/21, 3:04 AM
🥰 @TheWanderer
12/9/21, 11:34 PM
this is a cool idea 😁😁 looking forward to the next chapter of edits, you have a great flair for creating some really engaging characters--particularly in that story. And that isn't even considering the smuttyness, which you do a great job of too!

12/10/21, 12:36 AM
@Botbot just finished actually reading and now just as eager for the next installment of this as I am for edits and corrections! part of me was thinking it would be hot if Dr D was restrained "just so he'd stop wiggling" so that Courage could lick whipped cream and fruit off him or something like that 😆

12/10/21, 3:02 AM
Thanks! I do have some ideas for how to make kinks cozy/wholesome in the story, or cozy things kinky. @Botbot
Anonymous
12/10/21, 12:42 AM
absolutely love this idea! excited to see where this is going!

12/10/21, 3:01 AM
Thanks! @
12/9/21, 8:32 PM
This is cute, adorable, funny, sweet, and SUPER hot! I hope you keep writing this one!

12/10/21, 2:59 AM
Thanks! I have more ideas, but I wanted to gauge interest for this kind of story before spending a lot more time on it. @Hypno_boy
12/8/21, 7:53 PM
I'm one of the few people who gave mixed feedback on Part 1, but I think that Part 2 is so much better. Even though I'm not particularly into all the sock fetish stuff, all the descriptions of Nate acting unconsciously according to the app's programming had me rock hard. I hope that in the next part we get to see some of Nate and Tom teaming up to ensnare either their dad or big brother.

12/9/21, 11:11 PM
@Hypnothrill yes, I did have your feedback in mind while planning out this part, so thank you for helping inform my writing. i'm really glad you like it, and i hope you ensure the future chapters ;)

12/10/21, 12:04 AM
@FKH19 *enjoy