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12/9/21, 2:56 PM
this was hot . this us one if the hottest things I've read and I'm so hungry for the next chapter
12/9/21, 2:14 PM
Such a good story, hope to see more. Absolutely love the reluctance/desire to be their cash fag. Sure would hate for something like that to happen to me! *wink *wink
12/9/21, 10:12 AM
The master of sex-writing does it again. Never in a million years would I have written a story like this with those tags. And the start of a new series? Word count who? Great job Soren!

12/9/21, 1:34 PM
Aaaaa, you warm my heart! I’m far from a master, but this is heartwarming praise, anyway. @Norismo
12/9/21, 11:12 AM
For some reason I was expecting the gym guy to have given him the hyno video. So what does our main character look like other than having a small cock? Did his cock actually shrink? So many questions, I can't wait until the next part.
12/9/21, 11:03 AM
Yes! Excellent. Looking forward to the next part!
12/9/21, 9:21 AM
seriously, this is one if the best stories i've ever read! very well done! can't wait to read more.

12/9/21, 10:26 AM
@BiBear34 Thanks man!
12/9/21, 4:54 AM
Hot so far. Looking forward to seeing how it goes!
12/9/21, 3:57 AM
Me encantaron... quiero mas capítulos
Nov 24, 2021
11/27/21, 8:14 AM
It's a great idea but it all felt very quick - I'd have loved it if we could have spent more time seeing and experiencing the changes. I'd have loved to see how Brandon adapts to being a small twink from being a big tall muscular guy. I think it's a good starting point but I'd love to see it fleshed out more

12/9/21, 3:41 AM
@Growing Geek I agree with this comment.
12/9/21, 2:44 AM
Mmmmmmph! This was absolutely perfect! Now that we have Anthony's full backstory I'm looking even more forward to seeing him convert Callum from his little brother into a hairless caged collared slave boi! (Hopefully with plenty more gear like hoods, leather, rubber, gags etc too!)