Recent Comments

12/7/21, 6:21 AM
you should be super proud of this . so unique. The descriptions of his experience being manipulated....? exquisite. what a treat. kudos, we're lucky to have you.

12/8/21, 4:26 PM
Oh wow! Thanks! @Buster Red
12/8/21, 1:05 PM
Love it, love how you switch between the actual spoken dialogue and the narrator's internal dialogue. Despite his jaded I've seen it all attitude I giess he's going to get hit by a train he can't see coming? You're a fantastic writer, love how you drop hints of a broader understanding of the occult and paranormal. Looking forward to binge reading the rest.

12/8/21, 4:18 PM
Thanks! I'm glad you appreciate the worldbuilding! @Lux Phallus
12/8/21, 3:11 PM
I am usually proned to liking Dean more than Sam. But, damn what you did with Sam was absolutely awesome. I could see and feel every nuance. And, adding Edward like that just killed me. I wish I was in that backroom waiting for them. Please sir, can we have some more.
Nov 2, 2021
12/8/21, 2:58 PM
This is such a hot story. I'd love to hear what happened to his friends.
12/8/21, 11:59 AM
So great! I love all the humiliation
12/8/21, 5:13 AM
Interesting premise, which I believe has potential, but the strength of the world building was lost due to grammatical errors. You should reach out to folks in the forum and look for some assistance. Just getting another pair of eyes on it could make this really hot!

12/8/21, 10:39 AM
Thanks for the feedback! This is my first try on writing erotics, and also my first time write a story in English. Not only grammatical errors, it also lacks many crucial elements of a good writeup...... I'll look for assistances on writings here, thank you! @rodjock
12/8/21, 8:21 AM
Great series in all sense of the word. It's compelling story telling, I want to know what happens next, and hot as hell keep up the good work cant wait to see how it ends.
Mar 2, 2017
12/8/21, 4:54 AM
This became one of my favorites!
Oct 14, 2010
12/8/21, 4:52 AM
Blufman pulls me into his writing just like the character in this story.
12/8/21, 3:02 AM
Fully agree with Nutiper and Time here (and admire their good taste)! You're doing a great job layering out fantastic planks of an amazing story and weaving it together. I'm incredibly excited to see where it goes!

12/8/21, 4:43 AM
I’ve got lots of plans, and I’m really glad that the parts are already coming together! There’s a lot of moving parts, but I think it’s worth it. Again, so good to see a comment from a writer I respect. Validates me a ton. @Dace