Recent Comments

12/7/21, 7:49 AM
I'm enjoying this series so far, it's super hot! One minor edit: there's a Baxter where there should be a Killian > Killian asked me to put some clothes on, and, seeing as I trusted him implicitly, I shrugged on some rugby shorts over my thong. For whatever reason, as I shrugged on the shorts, Baxter removed his own shirt and shorts, sitting on my bed in just a white jockstrap. His monstrous dick strained against it.
12/7/21, 7:12 AM
Loving the story and set in my hometown too...

12/7/21, 7:38 AM
@Brummeeguy - I'm always excited to see other British dudes on here. Thanks man. I love Birmingham!!! I have fond memories of the German markets
12/7/21, 2:33 AM
Great story. I hope there will be a follow-up story. I'm envious of people who can write stories like these.

12/7/21, 7:37 AM
@tanners92 - Thanks man. This means a lot
12/7/21, 12:41 AM
This one was quite hot. I wouldn't ask you to actually change anything since the story stands pretty well on its own but if you were to try to clean it up I would either eliminate some characters and tighten things up so your focus isn't scattered or else expand the story to the length it really wants to be at to contain a scene with five characters.

12/7/21, 7:36 AM
@amul - thanks for the helpful feedback. I appreciate that
12/6/21, 11:16 PM
Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery. You hit all the right Blufman notes.
12/6/21, 10:33 PM
Aaaaaa, that was such a fun story! I loved the twists and turns, and I totally didn't expect the twist at the end either (although I guess it was starting to get foreshadowed by Brandon throughout the scene...) I think you mentioned you don't write sex often, but this was tons of fun. And although cucking isn't my thing, I could tell you were doing even that pretty well. Great Secret Santa entry!

12/6/21, 10:42 PM
@Soren Fitz High Praise indeed! Thank you so much for such kind words!
RN
12/6/21, 8:43 PM
I love the series, though I hope that Archie will have an ending that's different from being banged by multiple guys.

12/6/21, 10:06 PM
@RN keep reading
12/6/21, 1:37 PM
What a great start to Secret Santa season! I liked the different body types, so often there is only one. If there was no word count limit I would have loved to see some resistance from one of the guys.

12/6/21, 10:04 PM
@Norismo - thanks so much for the encouragement. I was all ready with resistance, more detail around the Tattooed brute and a few other lines when I suddenly thought "O crap, I'm at 2,700 words I better check if there's a limit. Well I'm 1,911 words over, but I'm not being graded and it's not a competition :)
12/6/21, 8:30 PM
really looking forward on how cooper will use those video for...
12/6/21, 7:56 PM
Such a great story! Danny's reveal really hints at a hot transform.