Such a great story! Danny's reveal really hints at a hot transform.

Dylan, This is mostly a reaction to something @amul mentioned...I had no idea that one a tag is used it's there forever and then applied to all chapters thereafter. My thoughts on this is either a specialized tag system for what I call 'one-offs', topics that might be offensive but are there for plot purposes only in a single chapter. If a new type of tag isn't possible, when there is potential controversial subjects which probably won't appear in additional chapters, do NOT tag it and place a warning about said content before the story starts, naming the content, that it's there for plot purposes only and isn't likely to be seen elsewhere in the series. I've seen some authors do this on other platforms and it seems to work well. Now there was another comment he made that I think applies to everyone...asking your readers for suggestions on how to direct the story as it continues.... If you are writing specifically for **your readers** than this is a fine approach...so go for it. But if you are writing for **yourself** this is a very bad idea...so let me explain... I write what pleases and appeals to me and when/if I decide to share it...if others enjoy it than great. I started a couple series on SlaveNow (miss that and my other yahoo groups), one was called **Modern Slavery 101**. I had a lot of people who liked it even though it was on the tame side compared to most of the other fare in the group. But then some wanted it to go a specific way...between that and the constant harping about *'Where's the next chapter?!!!*' It got rather off-putting and I stopped writing and posting as now it felt like a job rather than a hobby. Long story short...when you open it up for suggestions and direction...the story is no longer yours (there is a caveat here*) and at this point you'll likely either lose interest or what was fun becomes a chore. In either case you'll stop writing it. The caveat...my problem (well one of) is I start out very strong in the beginning and almost always have a good idea of the ending. It's filling in the middle part that bogs me down...more so as I don't want to get into a repetition (when you're covering a span of a whole semester, there is a lot of gap to fill in; especially when the first 7+ chapters is barely 2 days). So in this case, suggestions might give you some ideas you might not have thought of for filling in gaps in your story. Just my 2-cents. PS...for those of you who know of my Modern Slavery 101 story...while I have always hoped to get back to it; not only is the interest gone, but my writing...style and appeal has shifted since I wrote that 12-13 years ago: I don't believe I could carry on without it being noticeably different from the start. So no...it's not going to happen...not that I could post it here anyways...slavery, high school, teens with minimal, almost non-existent mind-control...not a good fit.

I think I know where this is going: the ghosts feed on the artifacts, get stronger and begin converting the whole agency, Am I close or not?

Lord Robin is such a dumb slut, honestly goals. I need me some ghosts like this, life would be so much easier :(

*Well* worth the wait! The plot thickens!

I love this story, and this chapter was incredible! I like how the dominance/submission is complicated by the fact that Rob is nominally the "master" and the ghosts his "servants". Also, the fact that despite the ghosts clearly being suspicious and sketchy as heck, Rob's interactions with them have an affectionate and loving feel: is that all *just* brainwashing that he's oblivious to, or is that not giving Rob enough credit? (Well, based on his apparent inability to say no to Alan's orders at the end, it seems there have definitely been some pretty heavy mental changes.) Alan clearly thinks he knows just what to do and Rob doesn't, but it's not clear Alan isn't in over his head here. Him being an asshole to Rob in contrast to the ghosts is also neat and hot. I don't know exactly how I want it to end, but I'm looking forward to more!

Glad to see you continuing with this story. It’s turning into quite an intriguing mystery and all the more enjoyable for the steamy supernatural sex!

the dick shrinking/cages were the best part and don't let anyone tell you otherwise ;) great story!

Liked the story a lot. Since you asked: The pacing was perfect. I like a slow build. Not crazy about the shrinking cock/cock cage. Would have enjoyed more invasive action on the part of the patrons, including enjoying the (large) cocks of the lifeguards -- i.e., having at least some of the sex going in the opposite direction. I like the idea of the lifeguards acquiring big cocks, tits, plushy asses that are at all times available to the patrons. Of course, that's really a different story, but I assume you'll be writing more stories. I'll watch for them.

Really good story @burntoutmilk. Like everyone else, I liked Jacob's slow, gradual mental shift along with the lack of awareness about the physical and behavioral changes that were happening. I love a good cock shrinking/sph story, so I would have actually liked more detail about Jacob's junk getting smaller. Or that the shrinkage was intentional and part of the changes Mr. Thompson wanted to see. I don't know if you have plans to continue the story, but it would be fun to see if the changes continue (more muscle, less cock) and how the relationship between Jake and Lucas develops. To the point @Cutlerfan made, I could see them becoming the property of one of the members once they reach a certain age or level of development/control.