Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery. You hit all the right Blufman notes.

Aaaaaa, that was such a fun story! I loved the twists and turns, and I totally didn't expect the twist at the end either (although I guess it was starting to get foreshadowed by Brandon throughout the scene...) I think you mentioned you don't write sex often, but this was tons of fun. And although cucking isn't my thing, I could tell you were doing even that pretty well. Great Secret Santa entry!

I love the series, though I hope that Archie will have an ending that's different from being banged by multiple guys.

What a great start to Secret Santa season! I liked the different body types, so often there is only one. If there was no word count limit I would have loved to see some resistance from one of the guys.

really looking forward on how cooper will use those video for...

Such a great story! Danny's reveal really hints at a hot transform.

Dylan, This is mostly a reaction to something @amul mentioned...I had no idea that one a tag is used it's there forever and then applied to all chapters thereafter. My thoughts on this is either a specialized tag system for what I call 'one-offs', topics that might be offensive but are there for plot purposes only in a single chapter. If a new type of tag isn't possible, when there is potential controversial subjects which probably won't appear in additional chapters, do NOT tag it and place a warning about said content before the story starts, naming the content, that it's there for plot purposes only and isn't likely to be seen elsewhere in the series. I've seen some authors do this on other platforms and it seems to work well. Now there was another comment he made that I think applies to everyone...asking your readers for suggestions on how to direct the story as it continues.... If you are writing specifically for **your readers** than this is a fine approach...so go for it. But if you are writing for **yourself** this is a very bad idea...so let me explain... I write what pleases and appeals to me and when/if I decide to share it...if others enjoy it than great. I started a couple series on SlaveNow (miss that and my other yahoo groups), one was called **Modern Slavery 101**. I had a lot of people who liked it even though it was on the tame side compared to most of the other fare in the group. But then some wanted it to go a specific way...between that and the constant harping about *'Where's the next chapter?!!!*' It got rather off-putting and I stopped writing and posting as now it felt like a job rather than a hobby. Long story short...when you open it up for suggestions and direction...the story is no longer yours (there is a caveat here*) and at this point you'll likely either lose interest or what was fun becomes a chore. In either case you'll stop writing it. The caveat...my problem (well one of) is I start out very strong in the beginning and almost always have a good idea of the ending. It's filling in the middle part that bogs me down...more so as I don't want to get into a repetition (when you're covering a span of a whole semester, there is a lot of gap to fill in; especially when the first 7+ chapters is barely 2 days). So in this case, suggestions might give you some ideas you might not have thought of for filling in gaps in your story. Just my 2-cents. PS...for those of you who know of my Modern Slavery 101 story...while I have always hoped to get back to it; not only is the interest gone, but my writing...style and appeal has shifted since I wrote that 12-13 years ago: I don't believe I could carry on without it being noticeably different from the start. So no...it's not going to happen...not that I could post it here anyways...slavery, high school, teens with minimal, almost non-existent mind-control...not a good fit.

I think I know where this is going: the ghosts feed on the artifacts, get stronger and begin converting the whole agency, Am I close or not?

Lord Robin is such a dumb slut, honestly goals. I need me some ghosts like this, life would be so much easier :(

*Well* worth the wait! The plot thickens!