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12/5/21, 7:45 PM
I think I know where this is going: the ghosts feed on the artifacts, get stronger and begin converting the whole agency, Am I close or not?

12/6/21, 4:01 PM
I don't want to spoil anything, but that certainly seems to be a possible goal for the ghosts. @darkblade2814

12/6/21, 4:08 PM
@bluesuedewho as you are the writer, it is up to you, but I hope this is where the story is going
12/6/21, 9:27 AM
Lord Robin is such a dumb slut, honestly goals. I need me some ghosts like this, life would be so much easier :(

12/6/21, 4:06 PM
Lol. Glad I've managed to write such an aspirational character! @HypnoticPrey
12/6/21, 10:12 AM
*Well* worth the wait! The plot thickens!

12/6/21, 3:57 PM
Thanks! Hopefully the wait for the next chapter won't be so long! @Norismo
12/6/21, 11:18 AM
I love this story, and this chapter was incredible! I like how the dominance/submission is complicated by the fact that Rob is nominally the "master" and the ghosts his "servants". Also, the fact that despite the ghosts clearly being suspicious and sketchy as heck, Rob's interactions with them have an affectionate and loving feel: is that all *just* brainwashing that he's oblivious to, or is that not giving Rob enough credit? (Well, based on his apparent inability to say no to Alan's orders at the end, it seems there have definitely been some pretty heavy mental changes.) Alan clearly thinks he knows just what to do and Rob doesn't, but it's not clear Alan isn't in over his head here. Him being an asshole to Rob in contrast to the ghosts is also neat and hot. I don't know exactly how I want it to end, but I'm looking forward to more!

12/6/21, 3:56 PM
Thanks! I've always wanted to write a story with a bottom who has a harem of tops to flip the typical script a little. Rob's attitude is a mix of his natural tendencies, deliberate interference from the spirits, and then some changes just caused by the nature of the house and its inhabitants. @drummer
12/6/21, 12:54 PM
Glad to see you continuing with this story. It’s turning into quite an intriguing mystery and all the more enjoyable for the steamy supernatural sex!

12/6/21, 3:50 PM
Thanks! I was a little worried the concept wouldn't work initially. @Ruffcub
12/6/21, 4:24 AM
the dick shrinking/cages were the best part and don't let anyone tell you otherwise ;) great story!

12/6/21, 1:49 PM
@Dcguy <3 glad you enjoyed it was fun to write. sometimes it's nice to explore other random kinks and i felt like cages and stuff was perfect for this story
12/6/21, 12:44 AM
Liked the story a lot. Since you asked: The pacing was perfect. I like a slow build. Not crazy about the shrinking cock/cock cage. Would have enjoyed more invasive action on the part of the patrons, including enjoying the (large) cocks of the lifeguards -- i.e., having at least some of the sex going in the opposite direction. I like the idea of the lifeguards acquiring big cocks, tits, plushy asses that are at all times available to the patrons. Of course, that's really a different story, but I assume you'll be writing more stories. I'll watch for them.

12/6/21, 1:48 PM
@gocarty aha thank you so much im grateful the pacing turned out okay - writing slower changes is much harder just because sometimes hypnosis in itself doesn't really get me excited to write. Also with some of the life guards having big cocks I sort of put the foundation for that possibility in the story (just like some lifeguards r obviously more important than others/boss the others around) and sex going in the other direction would be good to write. For now though i'm just probably gonna make more random stories that are fairly kinkier than this one ahaha
Jockmorphr
12/5/21, 9:53 PM
Really good story @burntoutmilk. Like everyone else, I liked Jacob's slow, gradual mental shift along with the lack of awareness about the physical and behavioral changes that were happening. I love a good cock shrinking/sph story, so I would have actually liked more detail about Jacob's junk getting smaller. Or that the shrinkage was intentional and part of the changes Mr. Thompson wanted to see. I don't know if you have plans to continue the story, but it would be fun to see if the changes continue (more muscle, less cock) and how the relationship between Jake and Lucas develops. To the point @Cutlerfan made, I could see them becoming the property of one of the members once they reach a certain age or level of development/control.

12/6/21, 1:45 PM
@Jockmorphr thank you! i wrote it on some level that the shrinking effects were somewhat intentional but didn't really make a concrete reason for the changes other than the sunscreen i suppose. Property of members is a pretty cool idea that i'll keep in mind but as for now i don't really have plans to continue this story just at the moment. More and more changes would be cool tho
12/6/21, 12:52 PM
Oh man. Poor Archie. Also, lucky Archie.
Jul 31, 2009
Zai
12/6/21, 10:17 AM
This is hot! Hot!! HOT!!! Just how it should be. White jock studs getting bitched and owned by a huge-dicked, muscled, handsome black daddy! A little tidbit to aid jacking off while reading this story. Look up some photos of those Texas Longhorn college studs in their see-thru, skin tight football uniform pants. You'll view some tasty white-boi ass framed in jockstraps AND their butts clefts easily seen.