Recent Comments

Blackjinx123
12/6/21, 4:01 AM
YAY! I'm so happy you decided to continue this. It's wonderfully written, a true delight from start to finish. I especially loved Aiden's inner monologue and sense of humor. The dark entity he's dealing with is fascinating, especially how he can shift and alter reality and change a person. I cant wait to learn more! Omar's a saucy little piece and the scene with him were scorching hot, and i really enjoyed seeing those two bullies who got what was coming to them. I'm so excited for the next chapter! I need to know who the little spy is and i so want to see more of Preston's new personality, not to mention how/if Ian gets his own punishment for being a good contender for worst parent ever. keep it up, dear author!
abc123
12/6/21, 3:13 AM
Morreeee plzzzzzzzz~~~ So hot!

Blackjinx123
12/6/21, 3:42 AM
@abc123, there will be more, i promise! ch. 20 is in the works right now. thank you, I'm glad you like it!
12/3/21, 3:58 AM
Holy fuck, man. This is truly epic in scope and execution. Well fucking done.

Blackjinx123
12/6/21, 3:40 AM
@Dace, thank you so much! i did my best and I'm so happy you enjoyed it :D
12/4/21, 3:15 PM
I can't wait for the next chapter! I know you said that Gabe is the main star of it, but I'm so excited for Marc to finally give Sam the fucking of a lifetime. Can't wait to see that!

12/6/21, 3:04 AM
Thanks! I don't have an exact timeline, but the next two chapters are both in drafts. I'll hopefully have the next chapter published before the end of the month. @Elmara
12/6/21, 1:49 AM
There's nothing silly about a hairy, sweaty blonde armpit. That's the stuff fantasies are made of!
12/6/21, 1:26 AM
I love the premise! The robot didn't quite do it for me though. A little too cartoony and too impersonal.
12/6/21, 12:17 AM
Wow. That was hot and intense. I love the reaction from Lucas too.
12/6/21, 12:10 AM
Really fun story!
12/5/21, 11:59 PM
I to loved the writing, the story telling, the direction. Great story man! exactly what I love to read
Dylan
12/5/21, 11:58 PM
Hi Aaelefein, thk u for your comment. First i have to say i also wondered why so few comments were made. As a fairly new writer for this site i thought the story is maybe not interesting enough. On the other hand, stories that got many comments during the first few hours after bringing them on here seem a little too extreme, don't you think? It is hard, i must admit. To answer you: I am experimenting. I have many ideas, but i have not much experience. All i try now is to write as good as possible, and try those ideas out to the extreme. And: What the Dickson Company does to poor Dylan and those other boys, and what Dylans dad does seems more arousing to most of the readers here then a psychological or philosophical approach ;-) I'd like to hear as many opinions as possible. And you will find some more twists and surprises and maybe one or two of ur ideas will influence the story. As long as i get a feedback, as long as i feel someone wants to read it. Thx , Dylan