@amul hi Amul and you for your answer I was thinking about methods to get more interest, like a "real" author who tries to sell a novel, not just write for the fun of it. I now realize that tag "Brainwash" is sticking and might reduce the potential readers. But you are right, its there and it will stick. I guess i will just go on writing till i get tired of it ;-) Or as long as i get feedback ;-))))

Hey @Dylan - I saw amul's comment earlier, and I've been thinking about it a bit. I've had some success in getting comments on my stories, so I thought I'd share what works for me. - **Write the stories that you're excited to write.** If the topic of your story is interesting to you, it will be interesting to some other people. You will never please everyone, and you shouldn't try. Over time, the readers who love your stories will recognize your name and jump to read your new material. - **Write lots.** Some stories will be hits, and you might not even know why. I can't tell you how a story will be received before I publish it – I just publish it and see what the reaction is. Some stories don't get a ton of comments, some get plenty of feedback. As a bonus, I've found that the more I write, the better my stories get, and I get more feedback more often. - **Ask for comments.** Sometimes at the bottom of a story, I'll put a short paragraph asking people to comment. Comments are really what keep me going, and I'm upfront about that. Recently I've been using that space to pimp my Patreon, and I've noticed a decrease in the number of comments I get here. It doesn't hurt to tell people you like comments. - **Keep series' short.** Every series I've ever written has had a drop off in the number of readers with each chapter. When people lose interest, they're gone, they rarely skip a chapter and pick the story up later. Sometimes I split up the themes I want to talk about into different stories – otherwise I'm going to end up writing something too long to reasonably keep attention. When you do want a longer series, try to produce chapters frequently. My series' with the least drop off are the ones that I released daily or every couple of days. Other authors have said weekly is the best frequency and it works for them. You're going to have a pace that works for you. - **Write interesting summaries.** Your readers need to know what your story is about up front. I used to write summaries that tried to leave some mystery. Now I write summaries that actually summarize the story in the broad strokes. I won't give away the twists, but I will tell the reader what the story is about. Readers have a lot of choices and good summaries help them find stories they're interested in reading. Anyhow, I know that's a heck of a lot of unsolicited advice. I hope some part of it is helpful to you. And remember – this is just a bunch of people writing smut for eachother on the internet – have fun with it!

@Derek Williams: Thx Derek! I guess i will use a few ideas i had and put this story to a well deserved rest ;-) before i start a new one. @All three of you guys: Ur giving me good advice i guess. I will at least try and do my best !

Oh wow, thanks! Very flattered that this is your first comment! @first ever comment!

@abc123, there will be more, i promise! ch. 20 is in the works right now. thank you, I'm glad you like it!

@Dace, thank you so much! i did my best and I'm so happy you enjoyed it :D

Thanks! I don't have an exact timeline, but the next two chapters are both in drafts. I'll hopefully have the next chapter published before the end of the month. @Elmara