Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/5/21, 5:21 PM
This was Hot!! Next chapter?
12/5/21, 7:20 AM
already read the entire thing from another site story was great at the start then it turned into some religious weird thing that turned me off lol could have been better

12/5/21, 4:51 PM
@Slave4U What site
12/5/21, 4:00 PM
This was so incredibly sensual, god! I loved it. I think I have a lot to learn from your smut writing… and I might read this again a few times just to make sure I’ve gleaned what, er, loads of knowledge I can.
Lakritz24
12/5/21, 3:26 PM
Love it, but smoking cigar with fire it produce Kohlenmonoxid CO, an it is very dangerus to the brain. i dont want it and dont want that to the Mann.
Nov 26, 2021
11/28/21, 5:59 AM
true love is really rare in this site, thats why i love this.

Kods
12/5/21, 2:49 PM
True love conquers all!
Nov 26, 2021
11/29/21, 7:30 AM
I have to say I really enjoyed reading this story, normally i dont read "Jock" stories. some on here might not agree with me, but i do like story lines that involve turning gay men into straight men, OK I know at the end of this both reverted back to being gay -

Kods
12/5/21, 2:49 PM
Thanks for your reply, I do think 'gay to straight' storylines can be...complicated. I wanted to addresses it for myself in story form and show my own take on it.
Nov 26, 2021
11/26/21, 3:05 PM
WOW! What an amazing story! It reads like a deconstruction of the "older guys become bros" tales that are all over this site. What happens to the lives that get left behind when those changes happen? Families, coworkers...as the intro says, our lives are not just our own. We connect to so many others; this story is a reminder of that. And I'm a sucker for happy endings, so I love that Elias loses and Steve and Daniel win! The love they felt for their child transcended any selfish power...thank you for this wonderful surprise. :)

Kods
12/5/21, 2:28 PM
Well, you pretty much nailed it on the head, what else is there left to say.
Nov 26, 2021
11/27/21, 1:46 AM
I was pretty worried there for a bit but I loved the ending!

Kods
12/5/21, 2:25 PM
Haha, had you going for the that first half, didn't I? but yeah had to make sure these two got what they truly deserved.
Nov 26, 2021
11/27/21, 6:03 AM
Honestly, I ***almost*** stopped reading half way through because I thought it was going to be the usual dumb jock story. I will do that with stories that lose me, I won't finish them. BUT once I hit the part about the now straight bros and what they were going to do with a little bro hanging around, I thought it might be kinda comedic seeing two less than sharp guys trying to take care of a kid. I'm glad I read through to the end, it was a nice twist on a seriously tired genre! Honestly, the dumbing down as you get muscles thing has just been done to death. Yeah, they ended up dumber, but I liked how it ended. VERY well written and I enjoyed the story!

Kods
12/5/21, 2:22 PM
Thank you once again for your kind comments! I did think having two clueless bros trying to take care of a kid would be funny. I'm also glad you enjoyed the twist and don't worry they're not too dumb.
12/5/21, 12:30 PM
this was so good :)