Recent Comments

12/2/21, 9:53 AM
hoo boy,for a first story this was amazing. I loved all of it. poor Nate got BOMBARDED,it was so hot to read Can't wait for more

12/2/21, 9:23 PM
@ForgottenCradle thank you so much! Yeah, poor Nate really gets an onslaught! glad you liked it

12/5/21, 11:03 AM
onslut ;) @FKH19

12/5/21, 6:01 PM
@Dapper hahahaha
12/5/21, 5:31 PM
Another great things about this series is about the detail and vatiation of the sex position...really like it :D
Anonymous
12/5/21, 5:21 PM
This was Hot!! Next chapter?
12/5/21, 7:20 AM
already read the entire thing from another site story was great at the start then it turned into some religious weird thing that turned me off lol could have been better

12/5/21, 4:51 PM
@Slave4U What site
12/5/21, 4:00 PM
This was so incredibly sensual, god! I loved it. I think I have a lot to learn from your smut writing… and I might read this again a few times just to make sure I’ve gleaned what, er, loads of knowledge I can.
Lakritz24
12/5/21, 3:26 PM
Love it, but smoking cigar with fire it produce Kohlenmonoxid CO, an it is very dangerus to the brain. i dont want it and dont want that to the Mann.
Nov 26, 2021
11/28/21, 5:59 AM
true love is really rare in this site, thats why i love this.

Kods
12/5/21, 2:49 PM
True love conquers all!
Nov 26, 2021
11/29/21, 7:30 AM
I have to say I really enjoyed reading this story, normally i dont read "Jock" stories. some on here might not agree with me, but i do like story lines that involve turning gay men into straight men, OK I know at the end of this both reverted back to being gay -

Kods
12/5/21, 2:49 PM
Thanks for your reply, I do think 'gay to straight' storylines can be...complicated. I wanted to addresses it for myself in story form and show my own take on it.
Nov 26, 2021
11/26/21, 3:05 PM
WOW! What an amazing story! It reads like a deconstruction of the "older guys become bros" tales that are all over this site. What happens to the lives that get left behind when those changes happen? Families, coworkers...as the intro says, our lives are not just our own. We connect to so many others; this story is a reminder of that. And I'm a sucker for happy endings, so I love that Elias loses and Steve and Daniel win! The love they felt for their child transcended any selfish power...thank you for this wonderful surprise. :)

Kods
12/5/21, 2:28 PM
Well, you pretty much nailed it on the head, what else is there left to say.
Nov 26, 2021
11/27/21, 1:46 AM
I was pretty worried there for a bit but I loved the ending!

Kods
12/5/21, 2:25 PM
Haha, had you going for the that first half, didn't I? but yeah had to make sure these two got what they truly deserved.