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Nov 26, 2021
11/26/21, 3:05 PM
WOW! What an amazing story! It reads like a deconstruction of the "older guys become bros" tales that are all over this site. What happens to the lives that get left behind when those changes happen? Families, coworkers...as the intro says, our lives are not just our own. We connect to so many others; this story is a reminder of that. And I'm a sucker for happy endings, so I love that Elias loses and Steve and Daniel win! The love they felt for their child transcended any selfish power...thank you for this wonderful surprise. :)

Kods
12/5/21, 2:28 PM
Well, you pretty much nailed it on the head, what else is there left to say.
Nov 26, 2021
11/27/21, 1:46 AM
I was pretty worried there for a bit but I loved the ending!

Kods
12/5/21, 2:25 PM
Haha, had you going for the that first half, didn't I? but yeah had to make sure these two got what they truly deserved.
Nov 26, 2021
11/27/21, 6:03 AM
Honestly, I ***almost*** stopped reading half way through because I thought it was going to be the usual dumb jock story. I will do that with stories that lose me, I won't finish them. BUT once I hit the part about the now straight bros and what they were going to do with a little bro hanging around, I thought it might be kinda comedic seeing two less than sharp guys trying to take care of a kid. I'm glad I read through to the end, it was a nice twist on a seriously tired genre! Honestly, the dumbing down as you get muscles thing has just been done to death. Yeah, they ended up dumber, but I liked how it ended. VERY well written and I enjoyed the story!

Kods
12/5/21, 2:22 PM
Thank you once again for your kind comments! I did think having two clueless bros trying to take care of a kid would be funny. I'm also glad you enjoyed the twist and don't worry they're not too dumb.
12/5/21, 12:30 PM
this was so good :)
4/11/21, 10:52 AM
great story! would love to hear about the gear the other guys got on next

4/11/21, 11:15 AM
@Horn During quarantine, I began a third installment to this series, called "BULL BAG" but didn't get beyond the exposition. Perhaps one day....?

12/5/21, 12:22 PM
@absman420 Eagerly hoping it comes out one day! Love this series of stories, this one especially!
12/5/21, 10:19 AM
I'm glad to see there was a continuation!
Anonymous
12/5/21, 10:17 AM
Hope the app re-writes reality,'coz its a shame if it were just in Nates mind.Love to see good innocent lads (as in his brothers and dad) corrupted by nasty dominant perversions ?
12/5/21, 7:23 AM
dont understand how this is in the pheromones category when theres no element in the story that indicate it only that archie has a medical condition which is his prostate is just sensitive thats it he doesnt turn people gay with his magic ass lol but good story
12/5/21, 6:45 AM
sequel? the new comet?
12/5/21, 6:26 AM
It worked out well!