Recent Comments

12/2/21, 11:15 PM
Love the way you ended things with the rugby team. plus the epilogue at the end makes me hope you have something in mind for a new story involving the swim team.

12/3/21, 10:52 PM
@Redcoma100 I wanted to leave it open but I don't have anything that would make it unique enough yet. If anyone has any ideas feel free to send them my way!
12/3/21, 8:35 PM
Finally archie got his own karma for mocking those surfer boys in part 1... i really waiting for this. Thank you !! :D
12/3/21, 7:30 PM
I'm glad to see you're still writing, buddy. You are not rusty at all, your stories are always pure delight. I hope you're fine and I wish you happy holyday season too!
Jake260
12/3/21, 6:50 PM
Great story, I just reread it and never get tired of it. Do you think we'll see another story with Red and Evan?
Dick Slave
12/3/21, 6:29 PM
I need a follow up to this!!
12/3/21, 5:10 PM
Wow, this is good! It would be better with some sex scene.
Anonymous
12/3/21, 3:49 PM
Welcome back, I have missed you so much. l wish to read you next story.
12/3/21, 2:53 PM
As much as I low-key like the idea of Whit getting this "ultimate power" idea conceptually - i love where this is going and cant wait to see more! could make for a good inflection point with two alternate outcomes...
12/3/21, 2:36 PM
....simply, thank you for writing. its a surprise and gasp each time. He knows his own power even when being a fuck dawg.
Nov 30, 2021
12/3/21, 12:11 PM
wow this one hit a nerve , while i did not take offense at the premise i believe Hypnothrill and ReMinder are on point , while a more in depth chapter or chapters might help explain how Matt turned , and why he was picked and so on might help with us who enjoyed the concept , although some will still object . good job Musky Master hope you take the constructive critiques in context