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12/3/21, 2:36 PM
....simply, thank you for writing. its a surprise and gasp each time. He knows his own power even when being a fuck dawg.
Nov 30, 2021
12/3/21, 12:11 PM
wow this one hit a nerve , while i did not take offense at the premise i believe Hypnothrill and ReMinder are on point , while a more in depth chapter or chapters might help explain how Matt turned , and why he was picked and so on might help with us who enjoyed the concept , although some will still object . good job Musky Master hope you take the constructive critiques in context
boi98229
12/2/21, 7:51 PM
Okay! I'm primed! So hot, but oh so frustrating to have to wait for the next chapters! It's like being edged hard, and then left to twitch and drool with my hands tied behind my back. Please tell me the next chapter is already written and about to be published.

12/3/21, 11:36 AM
@boi98229 Thank you Kindly! it makes me really happy that people enjoy my stuff
12/3/21, 10:43 AM
I love how slow and gentle this story gets. Really great stuff!
12/3/21, 10:08 AM
Any chance for a sequel?
12/3/21, 9:04 AM
first half reminds me so much of "My girlfriend's new master" from mcstories. Very hot story from you as always. Thanks for writing :) xx
Oct 10, 2021
boi98229
12/3/21, 6:51 AM
boi98229 11/4/21, 12:00 AM Thank you so much DomDad! What a wonderful experience and recounting. The fantasies created on this and its sister sites are extremely entertaining, but it is a rare treat to have someone tell us about their real experience, including how they felt and were transformed by it.
Ben
12/3/21, 5:20 AM
I have been your fan since I came across that Supernatural fic on Nifty, and I have read every entry of yours since. Superb work! Thank you for all the good time LOL

12/3/21, 5:58 AM
@Ben Thanks man!
12/3/21, 5:54 AM
Oooh, this looks fun. You painted two morally gray characters (during the first scenes, I found myself asking "Who exactly am I rooting for here?"). The magic is a fun twist, and I especially love the induction! I have a thing for classic inductions and guys getting sleeeeepy. ;D Amazing stuff!
12/3/21, 12:00 AM
Terrific story and idea, I love these scenarios. I do think you're falling into a trap that I also fall into and that's using overtly purple descriptors when simple ones would do. Calling an ass "bountiful" or the tip of a cock the "precipice" can work with the right framing, but when these $10 words get used too much it makes the writing sound overwrought. At its worst it can make a story exhausting to read. I can tell you want your images to be descriptive, but be selective of where you place emphasis and those special moments will stand out even more.

Adonis
12/3/21, 2:37 AM
@ThisisDiz I know exactly what you mean. My brain just hates seeing the same words over and over again. I have to find some kind of alternative version. I'll try to focus it more to just erotic scenes.

12/3/21, 3:33 AM
@Adonis I totally understand. Reusing the same adjectives and verbs is something that gets hammered into us as bad writing. Trouble is that we overcorrect and it sounds like we're writing out every synonym for words like "said", "large", or "climax" that could be found in a thesaurus.