Recent Comments

12/2/21, 4:07 PM
omg, this is getting soo good

12/3/21, 12:12 AM
@Tators45 thanks man!
12/2/21, 10:26 PM
Looking forward to where it might go. I love male family shit. Not really into the foot thing, but, for some reason kind of get off on it in stories. I got the impression that Dan might be the app Creator with a backstory there somewhere.

12/2/21, 10:49 PM
@Ed2you2 Thank you for your feedback! There is PLENTY of family stuff to come, don't you worry. I'm glad you enjoyed the foot content :) Hmm, yes I wonder who the app creator is. Guess we'll have to wait to find out :)
Rubber_Lover14
12/1/21, 11:29 PM
This story is really good. Personally, im really interested in the dad and nate. Especially the idea of him becoming his dads little slave. After all, its only reasonable that a dad helps him find his place in the world. Im unsure on the boyfriend and tom thing, mainly it making him a bit tainted already, making the transformation less impactful. Unless tom is the creator of the app, and will use it to get nate out of the way do he can take his boyfriend. Who knows. Well, you do, obviously. Cant wait to see what comes next, be it expansion of the current kinky fantasies you've involved, or the addition of more (like vacbed or sock gags or whatnot). One final thing is that i hope nate isnt completely submissive for the rest of this. A slow transformation, in my opinion, is the better choice. Slowly becoming more and more corrupted and subjugated as the story progresses. Anyways, cant wait for the next chapter!

12/2/21, 9:22 PM
@Rubber_Lover14 thank you for your feedback! Don't worry, i have plenty of ideas for the whole family, and the creator of the app. judging by your final comment, i think you'll be very happy with how the story plays out ;)

Rubber_Lover14
12/2/21, 9:37 PM
@FKH19 cool. Im always happy to give feedback. I cant wait for the next chapter m for a first time writer, this story has turned out fantastically. I can see it being one of my favorite stories to keep an eye on. Its definitely one of the best, if not THE best recent story ive read

12/2/21, 10:45 PM
@Rubber_Lover14 You're so kind, thank you! I'm so happy with how it turned out. To be honest, writing the story was just a fun personal exercise, so I'm thrilled with how many people like it. As I've said in another comment, I have SO many ideas for future chapters. I hope you will enjoy how the story unfolds
12/2/21, 10:32 PM
No apologies necessary! Worth the wait. Just incredible.
12/2/21, 7:11 AM
far out, dad's stinky ranks socks will do me in every time. Loved it!!

12/2/21, 9:30 PM
@James Heller you're going to be very happy with future chapters :)
12/2/21, 11:03 AM
If this story turns out to be less than five parts, it should be classed as a crime against humanity. 😂 It's *so* good. The cheating boyfriend was an interesting addition! So many places for that storyline to go. And the scene with Daddy's socks before the hypnosis. Is the rest of the family already being influenced? Fantastic start!

12/2/21, 9:28 PM
@Norismo this comment was so nice to read, thank you so much! don't worry, after seeing the incredible reaction this part has gotten, I've been writing down ideas and planning how the story will unfold. i was actually worried i had TOO MUCH material. so as long as people want it, i will keep writing chapters haha. yep, i have a lot of ideas on how to expand on Tom and Dan in future installments. Hmm, you make an interesting point. Has the entire family already been affected? Or is it just Nate? Are there any clues in this part that hint at future plot points? Guess you'll have to wait for the next chapter to find out! ;P
12/2/21, 9:23 PM
You've successfully taken this story to a whole new level. He realizes his gift with his jock body. He visualizes how his body looks to all these guys. He can sense the envy of his perfection and youth. Enjoyed the scene two chapters back where he notes to his friends going out on the boardwalk to show off their calves. He can see the aesthetics of his alpha qualities and gifted legs, arms, calves. Would like to see him really having to delve into how best he might wear clothes to be more revealing knowing the tease. His cut-out muscle tank along with tapered shorts. Wears his wrestling shoes to accentuate. He's constantly fighting the exposure yet lusting after the scene. Finds a mirror on that boardwalk to gleam over his body... in his wrestling street clothes. Gets himself too hot over his own body.
EJG
12/1/21, 9:52 PM
Great start.Hoping 4 more of the app turning Nate into a slut.

12/2/21, 9:19 PM
@EJG just you wait ;)
12/2/21, 9:12 PM
Love it!
Unowned slave
12/2/21, 6:49 PM
a dream