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12/2/21, 10:32 PM
No apologies necessary! Worth the wait. Just incredible.
12/2/21, 7:11 AM
far out, dad's stinky ranks socks will do me in every time. Loved it!!

12/2/21, 9:30 PM
@James Heller you're going to be very happy with future chapters :)
12/2/21, 11:03 AM
If this story turns out to be less than five parts, it should be classed as a crime against humanity. ๐Ÿ˜‚ It's *so* good. The cheating boyfriend was an interesting addition! So many places for that storyline to go. And the scene with Daddy's socks before the hypnosis. Is the rest of the family already being influenced? Fantastic start!

12/2/21, 9:28 PM
@Norismo this comment was so nice to read, thank you so much! don't worry, after seeing the incredible reaction this part has gotten, I've been writing down ideas and planning how the story will unfold. i was actually worried i had TOO MUCH material. so as long as people want it, i will keep writing chapters haha. yep, i have a lot of ideas on how to expand on Tom and Dan in future installments. Hmm, you make an interesting point. Has the entire family already been affected? Or is it just Nate? Are there any clues in this part that hint at future plot points? Guess you'll have to wait for the next chapter to find out! ;P
12/2/21, 9:23 PM
You've successfully taken this story to a whole new level. He realizes his gift with his jock body. He visualizes how his body looks to all these guys. He can sense the envy of his perfection and youth. Enjoyed the scene two chapters back where he notes to his friends going out on the boardwalk to show off their calves. He can see the aesthetics of his alpha qualities and gifted legs, arms, calves. Would like to see him really having to delve into how best he might wear clothes to be more revealing knowing the tease. His cut-out muscle tank along with tapered shorts. Wears his wrestling shoes to accentuate. He's constantly fighting the exposure yet lusting after the scene. Finds a mirror on that boardwalk to gleam over his body... in his wrestling street clothes. Gets himself too hot over his own body.
EJG
12/1/21, 9:52 PM
Great start.Hoping 4 more of the app turning Nate into a slut.

12/2/21, 9:19 PM
@EJG just you wait ;)
12/2/21, 9:12 PM
Love it!
Unowned slave
12/2/21, 6:49 PM
a dream
Zac
12/2/21, 6:10 PM
> "Fuck, this guy was getting on my nerves. Of course, Iโ€™ve never been hypnotised. Giving up control like that to someone puny and weak like him? Being a mindless helpless zombie, my lean muscled body just a plaything for my master? Yeah, thatโ€™s pretty fucking sexy, but itโ€™s not possible." This part made me insta-hard.
Adonis
12/2/21, 2:29 PM
Sorry this took so long. There were very annoying things happening in my life, so it was stopping any progress I made with the story. Thank you to Elmara for reminding me!
Nov 23, 2021
12/2/21, 7:27 AM
Can't say I'm not disappointed it won't continue, seems perfect for a sequel hahaha But I can't be too disappointed because your latest story was so excellent! You're a great writer

12/2/21, 9:25 AM
@GiveInToTheMusk ahaha thank you that's really good to hear because whenever I read what I write I always find it cringy lmao

12/2/21, 2:15 PM
@burntoutmilk Frig, i should have said seems RIPE for a sequel..... ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ™ˆ