Recent Comments

12/2/21, 4:07 AM
loved it! the pacing was perfection! Great read and i hope there are sequels!

12/2/21, 9:20 AM
@Cubwriter28 Thanks i appreciate it <3 probably no sequels tho
Silas
12/2/21, 12:44 AM
Loved it

12/2/21, 9:20 AM
@Silas <3
12/1/21, 3:27 PM
Even though the dick shrinking and chastity parts weren't for me at all, I still thought this was a very hot story, because Jacob's slow mental transformation was so well-done.

12/2/21, 9:19 AM
@Hypnothrill thanks that means so much <3 yeah the whole cock thing was just trying something new, not sure if its a kink i'll really bother with in future ahaha
12/1/21, 2:12 PM
Hot! I love the old/young control type of stories! Would there be a second part?

12/2/21, 9:19 AM
@MxHyp ahaha thank you i do too ahaha. Not really sure about writing a second part because I have no ideas at all for it
Anonymous
12/1/21, 1:59 PM
Masterpiece! The gradual control and unawareness is so hot that compensate the lack of sex in the history. I'd love to see a second part now that Jake and Lucas are completely obedient. How they just serve the patrons without thinking.

12/2/21, 9:17 AM
thank you!! I really tried to write the gradual stuff as best as I could :)
Chips
12/2/21, 9:11 AM
Hi Brian love your stories please lets have more soon as Christmas is coming we need some great stories to read and yours are the best
Nov 30, 2021
11/30/21, 11:27 PM
i have to ask myself that why the racial element here not to mention this has some historical racist tropes. This story seems racist

12/1/21, 3:13 AM
@Puppykix It's a kink. https://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=RacePlay if it's not one of your kinks, it will probably be somewhat off-putting to you. The author explained that he's not approaching the story from a sincerely racist angle, and I think we just need to accept him at his word.

Someone Else
12/1/21, 6:23 AM
@amul I gotta agree at least a little bit with PuppyKix, while I assume the author isn't trying to be racist, it's really hard to not think of the racist stereotypes this story uses. I think it's overall a good story with an interesting premise that i want to see more of (though i also agree with Hypnothrill that it could be a bit less rushed) I think the race play element should be dropped as it didnt really add anything and overall would be a better story without.

12/1/21, 11:07 AM
@Someone Else 99% of raceplay takes the opposite racial angle which is probably why it's a thing. I suspect if most of it were white dom/black sub it would be banned off the internet by now. Nevertheless it really is just a kink and not a political perspective. Your suggestion is a lot like saying that a story that has scat would be better if the scat were dropped because (most) people are put off by it. It would make it better for most people, but not the author and the author gets to decide.

Martin
12/1/21, 11:27 AM
Any kind of separation based on physical (or even mental) attributes is, in the end, discrimination. It doesn't matter whether we're talking about ethnic origin, skin color, hair color, body shape, gender or whatever else. All of this is, in the wrong context, unacceptable. I don't want to make ANY difference between them. However, in the context of sexual preference, sexual kinks and related things, it's totally ok to discriminate. It's what we always do. I sexually discriminate women in my personal life, for example. So please, stop talking about racism here. If a story would promote racial preference OUTSIDE of a sexual context, I'd not accept it. As it is, it's perfectly acceptable. EOD. (This was not targetted at amul, I just happened to click reply on his posting...)

Someone Else
12/1/21, 11:21 PM
@amul while that's a valid point. This isn't tagged with anything like raceplay or interracial or anything so there wasn't really a heads up those elements would be there. Also because the world is a shitty terrible place it's hard to fully divorce the political elements of the kink from the kink because there are totally people into raceplay for really racist reasons (not trying to claim the author is racist btw i don't know them and assume they are a cool person) who will feel more secure in their beliefs because of stuff like this. And that's not even to say raceplay is an automatically bad kink cause irl you have things like aftercare, consent, etc to help avoid the more harmful elements. And I'm not saying every story like that should have lengthy sections explaining why racism is bad and everyone consents to what's happening because that would be very boring and most people can suspension of disbelief that stuff anyway. At minimum this story should at least be tagged as raceplay and if the raceplay elements aren't that important to the story (personally i think the race elements of this story aren't needed but i'm also not the author) they shouldn't be there. I still want to see more of this story just think the race elements should be handled better if they are gonna continue on with them. It's also ultimately Martin's choice what is allowed on this site or not. I trust he would remove anything that was done in bad faith or was genuinely harmful, it's just the way things are.

Martin
12/2/21, 6:39 AM
@Someone Else You're free to add the tag raceplay. Even though I'm a bit hesitant about that tag (it does exist already though), because it attracts the wrong kind of people. That's the problem with tags. It's not so much the content of a story - there are countless stories that tell us about all kinds of atrocities - it's people who specifically search for these aspects because it confirms their existing bias.
Nov 24, 2021
12/2/21, 3:34 AM
Excellent story... and incredible use of a phenomenal photo set!

12/2/21, 5:57 AM
@Dumb Horny Jock Three photo sets, actually! Luckily, Kristen Bjorn keeps reusing the same models and the same sets, so it's easy to create the impression of a shared universe.
Dec 1, 2021
12/2/21, 1:36 AM
Niiiiiiice. And everybody got a Happy Ending to boot(y).

12/2/21, 3:25 AM
Hah! Yeah, I guess this one is a happy ending story.

12/2/21, 3:30 AM
@Derek Williams It's not even like being made sex obsessed was much of a change, he's just actually GETTING some...
12/2/21, 2:30 AM
it would be nice for his boyfriend to also have a change in reality, like becoming a total bottom to jack and david while and degrading nate at the same tine saying he never been satisfied with him.