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12/2/21, 2:30 AM
it would be nice for his boyfriend to also have a change in reality, like becoming a total bottom to jack and david while and degrading nate at the same tine saying he never been satisfied with him.
12/2/21, 12:45 AM
My boyssssssss!!! Ugh they're just so sweet and cute together, but this was *fucking hot* too. Loved the double bellies, and good job teaching Isaac that switches have more fun! Your descriptions are so great, with the right balance of realism and kink. Eager for those epilogue stories, but also eager for Halloween Hunt. I know it's gonna be good.
12/1/21, 11:43 PM
I like this story, hope to see more chapters.
Martin
12/1/21, 10:24 PM
Thank you so much for this hot fapping session!

12/1/21, 11:40 PM
Now *that’s* some praise that makes my day. I’m glad it was hot… and useful! =P @Martin
Dec 1, 2021
12/1/21, 10:55 PM
As always, I love your writing. But I especially like the twist of the hot jock being a bottom and using the amulet to turn another bottom into a top for him. I honestly had a feeling that's how it was going to turn out from the beginning, but watching it happen was hot. Great stuff.

12/1/21, 11:16 PM
Thank ye' sir! I enjoyed writing the twist, but yeah, it was right there in the title ;) I'm with you – the fun is knowing that it's happening, and watching it unfold.
Dec 1, 2021
12/1/21, 3:34 PM
ahhh, there's such a dearth of good bottom-to-top content, since top-to-bottom is so much more popular here. i super enjoyed this one!! only thing is i was hoping ben and vaughn would recognize him, but i guess since justin got retconned that wouldn't really work.

12/1/21, 10:54 PM
Thanks! I actually got inspired to write this by reading Jock Topper's recent stories. I like the idea of top to bottom, but it felt almost subversive to go the other direction. I enjoyed playing around with the bottom to top concept a lot. In the original outline, Justin was going to remember Ben and Vaughn, but they wouldn't remember him. At some point during the transformation scene, I realized it was more fun to make Justin oblivious to the changes too. I thought I was going to end with a scene where Justin approaches the two at the club, starts to tell them everything, and when they don't remember him he decides to take them back to his place and form some new memories. In a way, I'm glad I avoided that – it sounds a little sad.
Dec 1, 2021
12/1/21, 2:34 PM
Sometimes with your stories, what really gets me is the little details. You are great at writing fast and tight without extraneous unnecessary stuff, but the reason you are so good at it is the little bits you throw in. “This was way too good to be true, but you don’t look a gift cock in the horse or whatever.” Totally in character, implies that Justin knows the saying but fucked it up, and it’s funny. “I don’t know,” Ben was saying. “Like, sure, I could do a threesome, but I’d totally be judging myself.” I can absolutely hear myself saying that and immediately started thinking about Ben in a particular, somewhat uptight, self-loathing, self-deprecating way. I love it! Thanks for posting!

12/1/21, 10:49 PM
Thanks @MonsterMash62! I planned this one out to a pretty strict word count, and I feel like I got it decently tight. On the old site, someone once told me I "write like a radio play", and that's the best compliment I've ever gotten. Like Strunk & White say – omit needless words. I'm glad you enjoyed the details. Like we've chatted about on Discord, one of the things I do in life is standup comedy – those details are there because sometimes I can't resist a punchline. I've never done a threesome either, for exactly the same reason as Ben. I'm glad it got Ben's personality across succinctly! Thanks for commenting. You know I'm a total fanboy for you.
12/1/21, 10:45 PM
I always enjoy your diaper stories. Things started off rather rough for Timmy, but it looks like he'll be alright ultimately.
12/1/21, 9:02 PM
I really liked this! I was just a little confused about whether Dan was actually cheating on Nate with his younger brother, or if that was just a fantasy that the app put into Nate's head. I also had no idea why the app creator would want to change Nate in this way, but presumably that will be answered in a further chapter!

12/1/21, 9:35 PM
@Hypnothrill thank you for your feedback! So I wrote it with the intention that Dan actually was cheating on Nate - the app had found Tom's OnlyFans and was showing Nate the videos on there, one of which was of him and Dan :) to be honest i put less stock into the app creator - i wanted to focus more on developing the family and their relationship, at least for the start of the story. So for now the behind the scenes of the app is less important than what it will do to the characters. but, maybe the creator will show up in future chapters :) thank you again for reading!

12/1/21, 9:50 PM
@FKH19 To me, that just seems like such a weird detail. Nothing we learn about Tom at the beginning leads us to believe that they're the kind of person who would cheat with their big brother's boyfriend and present the video evidence of it on a publicly accessible website. IMO, this kind of "normal family slides into perversion" story works a lot better when the characters aren't from the very beginning acting like someone in a porn film.

12/1/21, 10:14 PM
@Hypnothrill thank you for your opinion. i'm glad you liked the story as a whole :)
Dec 1, 2021
12/1/21, 12:29 PM
Incredible stuff! You write Justin's original mental state so well that the personality change into a jock is extra hot. Short, sweet, and packed with descriptions of attractive guys--what's not to like? :D

12/1/21, 10:14 PM
Thanks! The personality change was my favourite part of writing this, along with the ironic idea that all Patrick wanted was a hot jock to top him.