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12/1/21, 4:58 PM
I love this series. I can't even predict what's gonna be the ending for this. Your writing is terrific!

12/1/21, 5:06 PM
@Rspark Thanks man!
12/1/21, 3:49 PM
Your mastery of sensuality is *delicious*. This was so fucking hot the whole time, especially the sex scene; I couldn’t get enough. Can’t wait to read more!
12/1/21, 1:58 PM
Oh my *god,* this was so fucking hot from beginning to end! I loved Razz cumflating Derek’s udder (and the massive cock), I loved the montage-type scene of Derek getting milked all night—I’m a sucker for describing things as lasting a long time—I loved the hypermasculinity transformation; it was all so good. Looking forward to more!
12/1/21, 11:59 AM
Very nice! It's always nice to see some "behind the curtains" and read the hypno script. I was however expecting Victor to be the victim in the end. The plot twist was that there wasn't one.

12/1/21, 12:33 PM
@Josh Slater That's an interesting take. I never considered it, which is partially why Victor is named as he is. He was always going to be the victorious character at the end of the story. I never catch myself doing the obvious naming thing while I'm writing, but i DEFINITELY SEE IT AFTER when it's posted.
12/1/21, 10:59 AM
Wow! A hidden gem indeed! I liked the mantra part a lot. A little dark for my tastes, but I still enjoyed it a lot!

12/1/21, 11:25 AM
@Norismo Thank you SO MUCH for commenting! I always work hard on my mantras and inductions. I really appreciate you giving my little fic a try
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12/1/21, 10:04 AM
This is really well written! Can't wait for more!
12/1/21, 7:32 AM
I want the next chapter now!! I check this out everyday to see if there's an update lol love this story!
12/1/21, 5:56 AM
I’m very glad you decided to revisit this storyline of yours as it’s a favourite of mine! Can’t wait to see where it’s going!!!
12/1/21, 4:35 AM
Echoing the previous comment. discovered this series today and love it!
12/1/21, 3:28 AM
man i feel bad for archie! he's arrogant but i think with the right training he'd clearly be a great subby guy for the right handler, for everyone's benefit. i hope he ends up with a handler or a couple, and maybe even for his friends on the team to use him but "respect" him too. pre game ritual to fuck archie so the team can win nationals. coach could get in on it too. fuck it's so hot gray's dad fucked him. gonna go dump another load now