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boi98229
11/29/21, 9:38 PM
Hey @SlaveBoyJG! i love the storyline, and the characters as far as you have developed them. The theme of betrayal anywhere near to this extent is something new for me, and along with the kidnapping it was definitely very arousing. My only real suggestion, admittedly personal to my tastes, is that the whole thing would be better if it were all longer with more detailed character development and plot, if it held us in suspense longer, and perhaps the 'surprise' ending were more of a surprise. You might have satisfied me completely if you had included in the initial setup more about how James had gotten in deeper into debt and deeper in trouble with Mr. Masters, how that relationship developed. Somehow up front you might have set up the circumstances to obscure James' motivation and decision to betray Seth. More plot at the end would be nice too. Like, is Mr. Masters secretly into slave training and sales. What exactly happened after the kidnapping? Anyway, thanks! i like your thinking and will definitely be back to read more of your stories.
11/29/21, 7:48 PM
Sexy as always; would have been hot to see "Mr Cash Masters" subs be the ones to use him in the end but otherwise another hot takedown story!!

Cracker
11/29/21, 7:51 PM
Thanks. I debated doing that but, it was a question of, "been there; done that already"@Mr Jack Off

11/29/21, 9:32 PM
@Cracker never hurts to add it ; your 'cash master mastered' stories are still your best
11/29/21, 8:59 PM
Amazing. It's one of my favorite stories on the site and i can't wait to see where it goes!
11/29/21, 6:07 PM
it's just keep getiing better and better... :D
11/29/21, 3:31 PM
To be continued* It was great. It would be great if there was a Superman's downfall story that is written like yours, that is without kryptonite, hypnosis or drugs (though this one had hypnosis and drugs) but with only psychological manipulation. Your stories are so hot.

Cracker
11/29/21, 3:32 PM
Hey thanks. Feedback is rare and always appreciate it. Glad you enjoyed it.@Superbelt
11/29/21, 2:13 PM
I hope we can see more of this Sir? I hope Mark loses his man's underwear for panties permanently.
Island Jock
11/29/21, 1:36 PM
Waiting to see how he takes control of his father. How will Omar react to his buddies jumping his new lover?
11/20/21, 6:09 PM
I miss this story badly.

Blackjinx123
11/29/21, 6:09 AM
@Erratic101, I'm so sorry for the delay! the chapter is finally done and should be up in the next couple of days. thank you so much for your patience! :)

11/29/21, 11:06 AM
@Blackjinx123 i hope it launches today!!
Kent
11/29/21, 10:06 AM
hottt would love to hear about the room mates day
Kent
11/29/21, 9:53 AM
i love this series so much