Recent Comments

11/28/21, 12:31 PM
Please do another chapter, I have to know how this ends.
easdf
11/28/21, 12:23 PM
Even before reading, I just have to say that the title is brilliant!
11/28/21, 12:08 PM
You have my undivided attention.... Ive been reading with a slight sweat Hot
Anonymous
11/28/21, 10:15 AM
Disturbing but well written and HOT.
11/28/21, 9:43 AM
Fantastic. Simply fantastic. I picked this story up a few days ago, then went on a speed-reading spree, going through the chapters. Spent a bit in agony, waiting for this one. And, well, I'm enjoying this more than ever. It's nice to see the softer, gentler side of someone with Archie, and I can't wait to see more like this.

11/28/21, 10:11 AM
@Lancelot Thanks man, I'm glad you're liking it.
Nov 24, 2021
11/28/21, 9:05 AM
another classic!
Anonymous
11/28/21, 8:47 AM
Hot concept but would prefer to see the main character feeling pleasure against his will instead of dry fucking and pain. Personally would also prefer a scenario like this where the bottom stays butch instead of getting femmed. Any suggestions? But have to say, you write very very well and different readers have different kinks so hope the story gets ya well-deserved kudos, man.
11/28/21, 7:43 AM
Well written but for me at least, not at all erotic. The clinical first person description of the story's events was disturbing, providing an insight into the narrator's mind that completely killed the possibility of getting off on the unwilling subject fetish. Did make me think though, this is after all, a reflection to many stories here.
boi98229
11/27/21, 10:37 PM
Oooops! i hope you weren't expecting me to wait for permission... ;)))) This story is impossibly hot! Really, what else did you expect? ...i think i might need some more mind control training.

11/28/21, 5:06 AM
@boi98229 Oh, you know, these mind control stories have a way of leaving their imprint. I'm sure you'll get by without further training ;). What a joy and privilege to have such a dedicated reader -- we're glad you've enjoyed the story so much so far! Really glad to hear that you're finding it hot ^^! From @Cuddle-switch: "We've started to write the next chapter and are about 2300 words in. I would be curious to hear about what you think the Golden Lattice ceremony is, and see how it compares to what we have planned!"
11/28/21, 4:17 AM
I'll buy the other parts eventually.