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Anonymous
11/28/21, 8:47 AM
Hot concept but would prefer to see the main character feeling pleasure against his will instead of dry fucking and pain. Personally would also prefer a scenario like this where the bottom stays butch instead of getting femmed. Any suggestions? But have to say, you write very very well and different readers have different kinks so hope the story gets ya well-deserved kudos, man.
11/28/21, 7:43 AM
Well written but for me at least, not at all erotic. The clinical first person description of the story's events was disturbing, providing an insight into the narrator's mind that completely killed the possibility of getting off on the unwilling subject fetish. Did make me think though, this is after all, a reflection to many stories here.
boi98229
11/27/21, 10:37 PM
Oooops! i hope you weren't expecting me to wait for permission... ;)))) This story is impossibly hot! Really, what else did you expect? ...i think i might need some more mind control training.

11/28/21, 5:06 AM
@boi98229 Oh, you know, these mind control stories have a way of leaving their imprint. I'm sure you'll get by without further training ;). What a joy and privilege to have such a dedicated reader -- we're glad you've enjoyed the story so much so far! Really glad to hear that you're finding it hot ^^! From @Cuddle-switch: "We've started to write the next chapter and are about 2300 words in. I would be curious to hear about what you think the Golden Lattice ceremony is, and see how it compares to what we have planned!"
11/28/21, 4:17 AM
I'll buy the other parts eventually.
11/28/21, 4:11 AM
Some great scenes in the 4th part!
11/28/21, 1:47 AM
Great story so far. I hope good things happen.

11/28/21, 3:40 AM
@Cutlerfan yeah this is going to be more in the romance/drama direction of things. I'm hoping to get to the steamy fun stuff (for Caleb *and separately* for his dads!) in the next few chapters as he navigates this little secret of his.
11/28/21, 12:21 AM
hot!!
11/27/21, 7:15 PM
Definitely should have a sequel or another chapter showing Joe change someone!

Dylan
11/28/21, 12:03 AM
@Cutlerfan Thx sir..right now im new here and working to edit my own stuff to improve mistakes i found . But soon this story will go on!
11/27/21, 10:17 PM
First story I've read where there is self-sucking! I'm loving this twisted tale!

Dylan
11/28/21, 12:01 AM
@tankonpoint Thx Sir, i try my best to surprise
boi98229
11/26/21, 5:02 AM
i do love a slow burn! The seduction is so much sweeter. i feel like the story is building and i'm being edged psychologically. It feels good, but as good as it feels, there is still that drive to bring it on. That said, i am off to the next chapter. (@time.to.occur Thanks for this one!)

11/27/21, 5:29 AM
@boi98229 Thank you! Glad that you're still reading and enjoying, and hope these next chapters help give you some of that sweet, sweet payoff! From Cuddle-switch: "The psychological edging is both happenstance and part of the point -- the pacing of the sex has to obey the rhythm of the story to some degree, and the story is our main driving force. However, we were still disappointed that we couldn't find a 'natural' way to put a proper sex scene in this chapter." ...Which is why Chapter 6 is basically all the sex! I think that for both of us, being invested in the character and narrative makes the power dynamics and the sensual parts that much hotter. It definitely takes more time to get there than the average story on here, though! Hopefully we can sprinkle enough sexy bits between the "sexy" plot to make it enjoyable.

boi98229
11/27/21, 8:21 AM
@time.to.occur It is said that sex is mostly in the mind. How can the mind get wound up without understanding the context in which the relationship evolves and sexual tensions escalate? For me there has been "psychological edging" starting with the original conversation between Rhys and Jasper at the concert, and jumped dramatically when Jasper was caught and subjected to the new mind control technique. Every time Rhys and Jasper experience a moment of special connection and Jasper learns to trust Rhys more deeply and enjoy more freely, the thought of being a pet starts to feel less wrong and more right. Those are all important steps in Jasper's true submission and the power shifts in their relationship. For me, the seduction in an evolving D/s relationship is this shift in power, and every bit as arousing as the pure sex scenes. This psychological shift is, again, for me anyway, a huge part of the context that makes the sex scenes that much hotter.

11/27/21, 10:52 PM
@boi98229 That's delightful to hear, and Cuddle-switch and I both agree with that sentiment pretty well completely. It both increases the stakes of the sex scenes and gives meaning to particular acts. From Cuddle-switch: "This person gets it."