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Nov 24, 2021
11/28/21, 9:05 AM
another classic!
Anonymous
11/28/21, 8:47 AM
Hot concept but would prefer to see the main character feeling pleasure against his will instead of dry fucking and pain. Personally would also prefer a scenario like this where the bottom stays butch instead of getting femmed. Any suggestions? But have to say, you write very very well and different readers have different kinks so hope the story gets ya well-deserved kudos, man.
11/28/21, 7:43 AM
Well written but for me at least, not at all erotic. The clinical first person description of the story's events was disturbing, providing an insight into the narrator's mind that completely killed the possibility of getting off on the unwilling subject fetish. Did make me think though, this is after all, a reflection to many stories here.
boi98229
11/27/21, 10:37 PM
Oooops! i hope you weren't expecting me to wait for permission... ;)))) This story is impossibly hot! Really, what else did you expect? ...i think i might need some more mind control training.

11/28/21, 5:06 AM
@boi98229 Oh, you know, these mind control stories have a way of leaving their imprint. I'm sure you'll get by without further training ;). What a joy and privilege to have such a dedicated reader -- we're glad you've enjoyed the story so much so far! Really glad to hear that you're finding it hot ^^! From @Cuddle-switch: "We've started to write the next chapter and are about 2300 words in. I would be curious to hear about what you think the Golden Lattice ceremony is, and see how it compares to what we have planned!"
11/28/21, 4:17 AM
I'll buy the other parts eventually.
11/28/21, 4:11 AM
Some great scenes in the 4th part!
11/28/21, 1:47 AM
Great story so far. I hope good things happen.

11/28/21, 3:40 AM
@Cutlerfan yeah this is going to be more in the romance/drama direction of things. I'm hoping to get to the steamy fun stuff (for Caleb *and separately* for his dads!) in the next few chapters as he navigates this little secret of his.
11/28/21, 12:21 AM
hot!!
11/27/21, 7:15 PM
Definitely should have a sequel or another chapter showing Joe change someone!

Dylan
11/28/21, 12:03 AM
@Cutlerfan Thx sir..right now im new here and working to edit my own stuff to improve mistakes i found . But soon this story will go on!
11/27/21, 10:17 PM
First story I've read where there is self-sucking! I'm loving this twisted tale!

Dylan
11/28/21, 12:01 AM
@tankonpoint Thx Sir, i try my best to surprise