Recent Comments

11/28/21, 3:43 PM
Dude this is so hot great story keep it up!
11/28/21, 2:03 PM
I love your writing but I now have a favorite scene. Dax being turned out and begging to be fucked was amazing! I'll be happy with whatever we get but a scene of Archie topping a ecstatic Dax would be glorious!
Nov 26, 2021
Anonymous
11/28/21, 1:58 PM
This story needs a sequel. it should have more chapter.
11/28/21, 12:31 PM
Please do another chapter, I have to know how this ends.
easdf
11/28/21, 12:23 PM
Even before reading, I just have to say that the title is brilliant!
11/28/21, 12:08 PM
You have my undivided attention.... Ive been reading with a slight sweat Hot
Anonymous
11/28/21, 10:15 AM
Disturbing but well written and HOT.
11/28/21, 9:43 AM
Fantastic. Simply fantastic. I picked this story up a few days ago, then went on a speed-reading spree, going through the chapters. Spent a bit in agony, waiting for this one. And, well, I'm enjoying this more than ever. It's nice to see the softer, gentler side of someone with Archie, and I can't wait to see more like this.

11/28/21, 10:11 AM
@Lancelot Thanks man, I'm glad you're liking it.
Nov 24, 2021
11/28/21, 9:05 AM
another classic!
Anonymous
11/28/21, 8:47 AM
Hot concept but would prefer to see the main character feeling pleasure against his will instead of dry fucking and pain. Personally would also prefer a scenario like this where the bottom stays butch instead of getting femmed. Any suggestions? But have to say, you write very very well and different readers have different kinks so hope the story gets ya well-deserved kudos, man.