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11/27/21, 7:15 PM
Definitely should have a sequel or another chapter showing Joe change someone!

Dylan
11/28/21, 12:03 AM
@Cutlerfan Thx sir..right now im new here and working to edit my own stuff to improve mistakes i found . But soon this story will go on!
11/27/21, 10:17 PM
First story I've read where there is self-sucking! I'm loving this twisted tale!

Dylan
11/28/21, 12:01 AM
@tankonpoint Thx Sir, i try my best to surprise
boi98229
11/26/21, 5:02 AM
i do love a slow burn! The seduction is so much sweeter. i feel like the story is building and i'm being edged psychologically. It feels good, but as good as it feels, there is still that drive to bring it on. That said, i am off to the next chapter. (@time.to.occur Thanks for this one!)

11/27/21, 5:29 AM
@boi98229 Thank you! Glad that you're still reading and enjoying, and hope these next chapters help give you some of that sweet, sweet payoff! From Cuddle-switch: "The psychological edging is both happenstance and part of the point -- the pacing of the sex has to obey the rhythm of the story to some degree, and the story is our main driving force. However, we were still disappointed that we couldn't find a 'natural' way to put a proper sex scene in this chapter." ...Which is why Chapter 6 is basically all the sex! I think that for both of us, being invested in the character and narrative makes the power dynamics and the sensual parts that much hotter. It definitely takes more time to get there than the average story on here, though! Hopefully we can sprinkle enough sexy bits between the "sexy" plot to make it enjoyable.

boi98229
11/27/21, 8:21 AM
@time.to.occur It is said that sex is mostly in the mind. How can the mind get wound up without understanding the context in which the relationship evolves and sexual tensions escalate? For me there has been "psychological edging" starting with the original conversation between Rhys and Jasper at the concert, and jumped dramatically when Jasper was caught and subjected to the new mind control technique. Every time Rhys and Jasper experience a moment of special connection and Jasper learns to trust Rhys more deeply and enjoy more freely, the thought of being a pet starts to feel less wrong and more right. Those are all important steps in Jasper's true submission and the power shifts in their relationship. For me, the seduction in an evolving D/s relationship is this shift in power, and every bit as arousing as the pure sex scenes. This psychological shift is, again, for me anyway, a huge part of the context that makes the sex scenes that much hotter.

11/27/21, 10:52 PM
@boi98229 That's delightful to hear, and Cuddle-switch and I both agree with that sentiment pretty well completely. It both increases the stakes of the sex scenes and gives meaning to particular acts. From Cuddle-switch: "This person gets it."
Cracker
11/18/21, 11:49 AM
Amazing from start to finish. It takes skill to pull off a long story and keep it bone pounding fresh in each chapter. By the time I got to this one I'd rubbed my 'buddy' to a nub. Kudos

11/27/21, 10:12 PM
@Cracker thanks bud!
11/27/21, 10:09 PM
Mostly great except Sammy becoming the lone dom doesn't work for me. Sammy is no better than the dom he replaced. Best would be no labels and possibly Sammy and the narrator (I don't believe his name was clearly stated) are co-dom who also fuck each other.
11/27/21, 11:17 AM
From dax being dominant to being dominated in just a matter of a seconds ! Wow, i think the very expectable things from this series is the unexpected turn of events itself :D

11/27/21, 9:33 PM
@Sufan thanks man!
Anonymous
11/27/21, 7:50 PM
Bloody hell. Why is it that such hot stories like this. With three things i like. A bottom fagging out to (potentially) multiple Alpha Dominant MEN. Altered reality. and world unaware...are left incomplete and leaving me on edge???
Nov 24, 2021
11/27/21, 7:17 PM
Maybe Brandon would be drawn to big men?
Anonymous
11/27/21, 6:36 PM
Please please lets hear about Master Pietro and Chads butch dad...!!!!
11/27/21, 6:26 PM
This story was incredibly sweet and hot! There's few things I like more than well-dressed, stocky, SHORT men! You gave me a gift, sir!