Recent Comments

11/28/21, 4:25 PM
this was a very interesting read. aside from the erotic scenes at the beginning the man who poisoned Steven doesn't seem to see his actions as evil per say. He knows what he's doing is selfish but he sees it as he gave Steven a better life than living on the street as a drug addict. this could definitely be a more interesting story if continued further into the main characters psyche about how he deals with having this practically brain dead man at his beck and call
11/28/21, 4:09 PM
oooh i loved these two chapters, and i'm immediately invested in the characters. cant wait to see whats next!
11/28/21, 3:43 PM
Dude this is so hot great story keep it up!
11/28/21, 2:03 PM
I love your writing but I now have a favorite scene. Dax being turned out and begging to be fucked was amazing! I'll be happy with whatever we get but a scene of Archie topping a ecstatic Dax would be glorious!
Nov 26, 2021
Anonymous
11/28/21, 1:58 PM
This story needs a sequel. it should have more chapter.
11/28/21, 12:31 PM
Please do another chapter, I have to know how this ends.
easdf
11/28/21, 12:23 PM
Even before reading, I just have to say that the title is brilliant!
11/28/21, 12:08 PM
You have my undivided attention.... Ive been reading with a slight sweat Hot
Anonymous
11/28/21, 10:15 AM
Disturbing but well written and HOT.
11/28/21, 9:43 AM
Fantastic. Simply fantastic. I picked this story up a few days ago, then went on a speed-reading spree, going through the chapters. Spent a bit in agony, waiting for this one. And, well, I'm enjoying this more than ever. It's nice to see the softer, gentler side of someone with Archie, and I can't wait to see more like this.

11/28/21, 10:11 AM
@Lancelot Thanks man, I'm glad you're liking it.