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idontwantmyeggsscrambled
3/6/25, 9:04 AM
very you thought want good exactly that’s miserable always I never that those are words in _italic_, who knows if they are arranged correctly.

3/6/25, 12:13 PM
@idontwantmyeggsscrambled The Shadow do!
3/5/25, 4:09 AM
I think Mike needs to take Jeff’s jock strapped ass out to more places than just the gym. Let everyone enjoy Jeff’s humiliation. A day at the beach, maybe building a jockstrap tan line. I’m sure a sunburn on his ass would be painful. And other men would follow Jeff into the changing room before he left the beach. Or Maybe a camera and internet show, forced to do whatever the viewers ask? No matter your direction, Keep up the great work.

3/6/25, 7:05 AM
@[jkstrapme](/user/show/10003903) That is actually in the works. I'm working on a chapter where Mike takes Jeff to all the usual places they used to go as just friends but with benefits now.
3/6/25, 7:01 AM
wufffffffffffff..... exceptional
3/6/25, 5:39 AM
Just read this for the first time. Wow what an incredibly good story! Such great mind manipulation going on here.
3/6/25, 5:31 AM
This is a really fun concept! I love how extreme it's getting as the story proceeds
3/6/25, 4:28 AM
Such a hot story. I did find myself thinking about the alternate angle, where the black society falls under the trap of the other scientist's creation, tables turned....
3/6/25, 3:43 AM
Next chapter coming soon?
3/6/25, 3:24 AM
I was so happy to see this series updated!! I loved this chapter and I'm really enjoying the fine line being walked between arousal and fear. I second the praise for the dialogue too, it's super well written and the characters feel very rounded and alive! I can't wait to read more!!

3/6/25, 3:43 AM
@[JimsJorts](/user/show/10008527) Thank you! For the dialogue, I try to put myself in each character’s shoes, identify where their thoughts and emotions are at in the moment, and type what comes to mind- I think this method captures the flow of real life conversation well.